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Eika
2003-05-07 . chapter 1
This is Eika, and I'm not bugging u to update(though that would b nice...) It's about Kingdom Hearts. I got the game, my sis got ahead but it was my game so I was allowed to watch, and on the internet I found a working cheat. I waited all the way until it said The End before searching for more cheats, and I found this: Extra scene at the end! You have to defeat all worlds(meaning all the pages of Pooh's book have to b completed, Monstro defeated, and defeated the Hercules cup in the coluseum, along with all the others) and there's an added difficulty. See, you know the 99 scattered puppies? They all have to be found. I would've e-mailed this to u, but... netscape mail can't be found. It'll let me onto netscape.net, but not the mail section. O well. Later I'll e-mail u the 99 puppy locations (I saved them from the sight onto disc). Oh, and here's the thing: It's definately a prelude to Kingdom Hearts 2, and it's a series of sentences that explode at u from the screen. I managed to pick out a few that r hard to forget, 'You are the source of all heartless' and 'Maybe our journey meant nothing' Creepy, huh?
Junsui
2003-03-09 . chapter 8
That last part was cruel, lol. I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing your fics or updating my fics. I've been grounded for awhile. Control-freak parents don't like fantasy. Sorry.
Eika
2003-02-02 . chapter 10
Nice!!! I think.................................(1 day later)..................................................(1 week later)................... nope, still don't have a clue as to what's going on. Believe it or not, my birthday's this month!!! Woo-hoo!!! I'll finally b old enough to sign on legally!!!! Oh, and it was a good chapter(even if i did have to read all the others to remember what was going on)!!!!! Hurry up, 19 of February!!! ^_^ *_* Now, just a few words of advice.... I noticed u haven't read n e thing by Ravyn Crescent yet!!!! Come on, read it!! One of her stories and lots of her poems are getting published, but us on FF.net get them 4 free! Plus, she's the queen of irony! Two people(sorta) are trying to escape. One's half cat, the other rat. Tails and all! Exact conversation: You look so human.
Only when I try.
Hunter?
Yeah?
Hunter, wanna play a game?

LOL!!!! And read Guardian by Luki Dimension. She has me believing an army chasing after an 8-year-old and it's an extremely tough (called the enforcers for a reason)army, too! So how is it a white-haired teen, a barmaid with a knife, and a girl with a hairbrush can keep them occupied for hours??!!! Read it! And thanks for another chapter!
Eika
2003-01-03 . chapter 9
(starts doing the only dance I know, the Macarina) Haaaaaaaaappy Birthday too you, haaaaaappy birthday too you, Happy Birthday, Dear giggleplex (A bunch of idiots from my school shout the monkey line, complete with motions, and say Giggleplex instead of giggleplex) *those turtle things from Ipsens Castle hit them* Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaapppppppppyyy Birthday toooo you! Yay! You added another chapter! *Blinks back surprised tears* You dedicated it to me? Thank you sooooo much!!!! I'm one of the reasons you work on making perfection even more perfect!?? Ok, now for an actual review of the chapter(cover your ears): IT WAS KUJA THAT WHOLE TIME!!!!! I ALWAYS WANTED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM!!! THIS IS MUCH BETTER THAN THE THEORY OF HIM IN A MENTAL HOSPITAL COMPLETELY INSANE OR DEAD!!!!!! (u can uncover ur ears now) I also have a suggestion 4 u. I've checked ur lists, and I want 2 recomend 2 of my Fav. Authors. Luki Dimension has written many stories for FFIX and 1 original fiction. All have a few things in common: He gives you just enough warning of things 2 come at the end of chapters 2 keep u reading, the worst situations are also highly unlikely and usually call for a change of pants if u r not quick, and it's usually a prequal to the game. If it isn't... well, then it's his 1 original fiction. The other is Ravyn Crescent. She's just plain funny, advertises her other storys in her FFIX 1, and is constantly a bit strange. If u can write this, then u'll like her. That's all 4 now, and I'll b in touch!
Rhea Chryseis
2003-01-03 . chapter 9
:O *slaps forehead* i completely forgot to review the last chapter. ahhhhhh. well this can be a two-in-one review i guess. ^_^;

shiva! i love shiva. she's one of my favorite eidolons, although i like her character design in ffx much more than in 9, but oh well :D

wow, who was that voice that told maiaza to call him kuja? and why did he freak out all of a sudden? getting more and more interesting by the chapter.

and btw. HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY! :D
Eika
2002-12-28 . chapter 8
How could you do this? How can you make such a work of art? And most of all, HOW COME MORE PEOPLE DON'T READ IT!!! SHEESH!! THE NERVE OF THEM, PASSING UP A PERFECTLY GOOD STORY!!!
Akaia Autumngold
2002-12-24 . chapter 5
Yay! I finally had time to coem and check out your fasb story again! I have such a sad life! The only time I have to come on the comp is on Christmas Eve! Soz for not coming earlier but I just didn't have time! I'm gonna go read teh other chapter now!

Bye for a bit!
Gold Mage
tanuki and Leopox
2002-12-23 . chapter 7
Tanuki: Oh, yes. An other capter! WEEEE!XD

Leopox: And it's an good one too. :)

Tanuki: Is it just me, or is that white haired one who i think it is??

Leopox: Quite obivious, isn't it?

Tanuki: Annyway we do in fact like ficcies like this (Aint we sad or what??), especially when they're well written like this!

Leopox: Please continue giggleplex. ^_^
Junsui
2002-12-22 . chapter 7
Teah, i would definitely say the plot thickens. How could you do this to me?!?! J/K. Talk about cliff-hanger, them about to die and you have no idea who the silver-haired kid is. Hmmmmm. Oh yeah, everyone has to see Two Towers. Wonderful!!!
Rhea Chryseis
2002-12-22 . chapter 7
eee! so happy! i can't think of a better chapter to have dedicated to me. i feel so honored. :D glad you love the word "awesomeness". its a staple in my everyday coversations. hahaha

*flips through her copy of the art of final fantasy ix* huh, he DOES have green eyes. well you learn something new everyday. ^_^

and ooo i envy you. getting to see spirited away. i live in a place where anime, sadly, isn't all that popular so i doubt i'll be seeing it for a while. -__-

but yes, very nicely written. i'm guessing kuja is going to show up soon. with my lovely, almost always wrong predicting powers, i predict that kuja is either that odd boy or the voice. keep on the great work. *is still in shock that she had a chapter dedicated to her*
Eika
2002-12-22 . chapter 7
O my god.... ( deep breath)AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!???? TELL ME! IS THIS MYSTERIOUS PERSON KUJA WITH A SUMMONER!!!!!??????? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE SOON!!!
Rhea Chryseis
2002-12-15 . chapter 6
ah poor maiaza... getting lost in the Iifa tree and such. is kuja coming up soon? being that the tree IS his sanctuary and all. haha. the boy is still confusing me x_x but i'm sure all will be revealed in due time. keep up the awesomeness :D

-rhea
Dagger4
2002-12-14 . chapter 4
nice! what IS all this? im confused, u were right...
Dagger4
2002-12-14 . chapter 3
um... ok?
it ain't junk, 'Darlin! its pretty darn good, if ya recon on askin me!
u like ff9, ud love ff10!
i think u should try it, really!
Dagger4
2002-12-14 . chapter 2
this doesnt seem to have much 2 do with the prologue. hmmm, its good though. who is "willie"?
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