HAHA! that was a funny ending! I could kind of, almost see it coming.
okay, please don't hate me for this, but i have some...comments, to use a neutral word
firstly, I like the whole scene at the Riddle house, especially the part where Voldemort has the family pictures all neatly placed face down every where. however, if you remember, Tom Riddle Sr., voldie's daddy dearest, was a muggle, and so he wouldn't actually have moving, magical pictures in his house.
secondly, i just have to bring this up. your story is so very well-written, and it is obvious that you have invested a lot of time and thought into its creation. it is because of this that I plead to you: don't be in such a hurry to wrap it up! Both in the scene where Voldemort dies and the part where Snape pushes away hermione and is rebuked by pomphrey are just too fast. It feels like, you just want us to get the gist of it, but aren't allowing( or perhaps i should say enabling) the reader to experience the moment as fully and completely as it is. I still love your story, but climaxes are a bit of a let-down.
be cause I hate to leave a review on a less-that-sickeningly-cheerful note, plese know that your story has reinspired me to do somee reasearching of my own! Happy thursday.
May you continue to write and explore your abilities.
-Coriander

nice and deep

please write a sequel i love this story!

Wow! That was awesome. The ending was kinda anti-climatic but still, wow that was great. Umm you may want to update some of your story since as you probably know by now the Riddles would never have had a magical photographs. But that's all. A fabulous piece of work Madame!

wonderful! i just wish there was more

oh...oh! i think i may have just got it!

i love your little call to arms at the end there about rape. it's interesting, in a twisted way, the allowences we make for women and not men. take buffy the vampire slayer for example. in the sixth season, she starts a violent sexual relationship. if it had gone the other way, spike beating her and using her for sex, society would have called 'foul!' but because it was a woman abusing a man, it was ok. rape is viewed in much the same way it seems.

god, i really want to know what she asked

usually, i skim the authors notes or ignore them altogether, but yours are facinating!

fantastic!

wonderful

you know, the harry potter books are like to shows like buffy and angel in the way that something dire always seems to happen at the end of the year/season. the anual apocalypse!

wonderful and not at all what i had expected!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

The Lady of Shallot is my favorite poem!

anyways , moving on: it matches really well with your fanfic. it was really surreal and very well written. i liked it.