A new take on Liam to be sure, but not in a bad way. This was very well written and nicely done. I liked the knew edge you gave to liam, he does have a lot to be bitter for really. A lot.

He's still a child in his abandoned state.

Isolated by internal feelings. His hatred may solidate his ties with the resistance, but wouldn't it scare even him or the others. A leader needs charisma, be approachable to his people. He can't become cold and expect not to go ahead with his plans alone.

Well, I hope something breaks him out of his vengence feelings. I rather like him as an optimistic child/adult.

Later

Oh angry child, spore from a series of messed up things...

Uh, very very interesting! But the romantic part in me hopes that this will not be the way the show will go. ;)

And you write very well!