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Maraena
2006-01-03 . chapter 22
I liked that
Christiana Anderson
2005-09-10 . chapter 22
Please tell me that isn't the end!
ShanniC
2004-05-05 . chapter 25
Nice, not bad. I knew I had this on favorites for a reason. :) Hope to see the next chapter. Poor Isis. Also, Lex was very sweet when he said I love you.
NarnianPrincess
2003-12-06 . chapter 21
I really enjoy this story, partly because I love the way you're giving Lex a whole personal life, you know the way he's paired with one other than Chloe or Lana (because I really can't see that happening), and partly because you're a good writer! One thing though, does Lex have his own finances, I mean enough to sever all ties with Lionel?
wahinetoa
2003-10-22 . chapter 20
-fanning herself like crazy- You gotta stop, you bodacious babe, 'cause the keyboard and 'puter is m.e.l.t.i.n.g! That was right tasty and tender... just burstin' with emotion and sass! Glorious. Yay!
Jewel
2003-08-19 . chapter 19
Just reviewing again to say that I forgot to mention that your fic is funny as all hell!
Jewel
2003-08-19 . chapter 18
I know I said I'd probably be reviewing a lot, but the truth is, I was so enraptured by your fic, that I didn't even remember to review until this last chap.

This story is so good. And trust me, I know when a story is good when it's rated PG-13 or lower and I'm glued too the screen.

This fic is well written, interseting, and best of all...extremly plausible. Everyone's in character. The strange and great thing, is that I'm not really one for having OC's, but the way you write Isis and her interaction with the group along with the explanation of her past, makes her seem like she's a regular on the show.

Keep it up. I don't know if that's the end, but it sure sounded like an end to me. I wouldn't mind if you called it quit's there b/c I am completely satisfied. Again- excellent work.
Jewel
2003-08-19 . chapter 3
I'm probably gonna be sending you lots of reviews, so don't be surprised if your inbox is flooded with my email.

Review: I think, so far, that this is a great story that looks as if it will only get better. It has humor, potential romance, and very effective communication/interaction b/t ALL of the characters. I stress all 'cause quite a few people don't execute that last statement very well.

I'll try to read this fic. as slow as I possibly can so that I won't arrive at the last chap. too fast. Keep writing more.
wahinetoa
2003-08-18 . chapter 19
-waves at ya, blushing wildly- Aw... ya a sweetheart! This chptr and everyone before was a creamery delight! On the edge of my seat. LOL.. poor, poor clark. hah! We should all be so lucky, gorgeous. And how about those smashin' outfits? -winks- Devil woman. You are a goddess, Vashti. FANTASTIC!
Auroris
2003-07-30 . chapter 18
Erg...WHERE'S THE UPDATE! It's more than THREE WHOLE MONTHS since you've updated! You've probably been busy and all, but UPDATE! I hope you're not giving up on this story since it's a work of art that should be completed. UPDATE!

~Auroris, Herald of Hope~
Auroris
2003-06-19 . chapter 18
Hello, enjoy your story. The writing style is wonderful and you show the personalities well of each character well. Also sometimes you have subtle shades of colors here and there making the story interesting. I have a question for chapter 18. At the end of the story are Lex and Isis now returning to Smallville after Christmas is over? Does that mean the party that Bruce invited to them is already over? Did you skip that part then? I'm a bit confused and boggled at the ending of chapter 18! @_@ I hope you update soon and reply to me. I repeat...UPDATE SOON! IN ABOUT THREE DAYS! Thanks for your (hopefully) undivided attention!

~Auroris, Herald of Hope~
darlene
2003-05-09 . chapter 18
hey! how did i miss this update! *not checking the site for a couple of weeks in hopes that this story would be updated...* guess it worked!
so. another nice long chapter, yay! since you're still beta-ing it i'll not be nitpicky :) and i'll be brief here and email something longer. the title pretty much says it all - there was a lot of huh? for me as i was reading
interesting opening. very filmlike with isis doing those turns as she speaks. and then to find she was in the pool all along...or was she? so i was right! dylan is involved in the freakiness somehow! and i gotta say, there are some *freaky* goings-on! death, zombies, nightmares, what on earth...? poor chloe and isis.
loving the isex - that looks wrong! okay, lexis (better) interaction as always. but i think i'm just as frustrated as lex about just what is actually going on between them! okay there was the clue in the kitchen, but maybe i/we need it spelled out? hinthint...
oh, a bruce party. should be something! and what happened to isis goes out with lex in the dress and the necklace? love that line - "i want people to be unable to speak to me"
another good confuse-the-readers job. looking forward to more, especially any explanations. for anything. :)
wahinetoa
2003-05-06 . chapter 18
-coughing, splutterin'- Wh-what?! Oh, you didn't just leave us hanging like dat, chere... Goddess. On. My. Knees. If there are words to describe this chptr, or this story in general -- no mere mortal hunny, can say 'em. You leave me; trembling.
wahinetoa (still rampant)
2003-05-03 . chapter 17
You're my hero.. please keep writing. This story has become lifesblood in the Isis/Clark/Lex/Lana/Chloe lovefest. Cheeks flushed at the unexpected temptation in there -g- surprised by the Lexness in being a frustrated Lex. hehe. Devil woman. Glorious, Vashti. Absolutely *glorious.*
wahinetoa (rampant reviewer)
2003-05-03 . chapter 16
You make dreams worth dreaming, songs worth singin' and stories worth reading. -swooning wildly- From the terror, the angst and the sweetest moment at the end - to quote another legendary romantic moment.. "You had me at hello, Vashti. You had me at Hello." ;) :*) :-X
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