ok...that was kind of weird...but I think I got it? I think? You lost me for a couple of sentences there...I mean its not beacuse its confussing or anything. Its very good. But...Meh. Dont listen to me. I dont know wat Im saying. Im high! On sugar...m sugar, and chocolate. m
Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

That was beautiful. I was reading it with Josh Groban singing the song. Tom Riddle is great.

Very nice. I love Riddle, and you managed to delve into his young mind while remaining sane. :)

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Beautiful. Your work blows me away every time.

Perhaps you should be a writer. I usually don't review this many peices of one persons. But each story pulls up emotions so think that I have to commend you.

You must have been your English teacher's favorite.

Please, keep writing!

THIS IS PERFECT! *sobs* keep writing, you could be an author :)

What am I supposed to say? The combination of a young (disturbed) Tom Riddle and 'Let me Fall' works pretty well in this case. The song, of course, has been used countless times in hundreds of other songfics, but I think you've managed to carve out a distinctive character in this song: Riddle's evil and fantasy for it. The other people say this one's a dark piece, but well, 'Let me Fall' is supposed to be a dark song. And when you put you masterpieces of darkness together, as you have done, the result is simply... overpowering.
Listened to any other Cirque songs? They may give you more ideas.

now that i think about it, that song is definitly tom riddle (I was thinking Snape, even a moody Harry when I first listened to Quidam with a HP mindset).
love how the story is slightly poetic, isn't full prose, don't think it would work as well then.

oooooooh, that was v dark and good!

Wow... this is fantastic!! An incredibly well-written look at the mind of Lord Voldemort - all I can say is WOW!!