Please do continue the next chapter in this one...I'm on the edge of my seat.

Please post another chapter. I know that this story hasn't been updated for a long, long time, but I would love to see this story finished. Can you please finish this? Please post another chapter.

Thank You.

Please More!

More!! More!! More!

we like this story so far. it is very good. finish it for us, please.

Ooooo! :)

I can't wait to see how you save J from this one! :) He's really not in good shape to hold out against Lyle much longer......

What about Margaret? Is she really dead, or did someone find her in time?

You are truly Insane child!!!!!! And I thought you were bad at kamp! ;) This is extremely well written but I just wish I knew more about the Pretender! Too bad my 'rents don't believe in cable!!!!!!! Now I'm going to have to start getting on the net more often to read what you write!!!!! chills.

Mmmm. I like it. But then, I like Lyle. He is evil. Personally, I'd have liked to seen more description of the actual torture, but I'm sick and twisted like that.

I can't wait to see what happens next, emotional blackmail is so fun to read about. Really twists the characters up inside.

And I can't wait to figure out why Jarod's mom betrayed him. Probably Lyle threatened her with the death of other family members, or something equally terrible. Of course, she might just be a bad person. Who knows? Well...you do. ^_^ So's it'd be cool if you update soon.

You have to keep going! please, i want to know what happens and everything else!! it's so good so far, but not nearly as long as it should be.

Continue soon!!!! Please hurry!!

This is really good! I seen a lot of stories where everyone wants Lyle change into this cuddly guy and that's simply not the way it is.I'm glad someone has finally shown that lyle really is a sicko who'll do anything for himself. Please continue!!!!!

Jarod was brought to the Centre in 1963 and was about four years old at the time. He couldn't have been born in 1966.

Holy! Comon, there is no WAY your leaving us like this! (don't make me beg). LOVED IT Can't WAIT to read the next chapter. Great writing!!

You must post more as soon as possible. I need to know why Margaret could possibly do this to her son. Wow this was soooo good. Kudos’ to you as a writer.

OMG!!!!!!!!!That was perfect!!! you have to write more and fast!!!!Ahhhhhhh, I loved it. I can't wait for more!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
You can't leave it like that! Don't be so cruel......
*sniff*
It was very good though. Nice job.
Mel