oh i loved it so much but i hate you at the same time because i wish it would have ended differently but as the lines in fergies song big girls dont cry not all fariy tales have happy endings do they?

I don't know if anyone will even read this. But, I have to say, this is an extremely good story. EXCEPT for the part where, if I've read right, they're in their seventh year? Well, I know it's after their fifth. You continuously put OWLs. It would be NEWTs if it's seventh. Other than that, it's a great story. Sorry if I came off sounding...mean-like, I just figured I should point that out. But it's extremely well-written.

please i beg you write more my heart is as wonded as rons when not healed. of this story i must know for the lust to gather do they part or does fate take its tole? please do not hesitate to write more i have very much enjoyed this and to one part i cried. please write more.

I can't tell if that's a sad or happy ending, as the epilogue didn't really make sense to me. :-( Ah well.

Thanks for writing, and sharing it with us.

wow...that was a really powerful story.

i'm glad things worked out but for a while there you scared me and i'm sure other readers as well...romance isn't always fluffy...love isn't this ongoing perfect happiness and i think you portrayed that in such a wonderful way.

Lost Dove,
All I have to say is, wow. This chapter and
the previous chapter have impacted me (well, the
whole story has) deeply. They made me tear.
I know I sound like a majorly fluffy sap, but I am
proud of it!:) Anyway, I loved this whole story
--wonderful writing--and I will read it over
and over and over! I have only written very short
stories of my own, most of which are about Ron
and Hermione :D. I have not yet submitted them,
but they are wonderfully fun to write.
I especially enjoyed the last three paragraphs in
Chapter 11 - very powerful prose. I hope to read more
from you in the future. Thank you!
-Rosie Gamgee

All I can say is "wow."

Really pretty...

this was a really really good fanfiction! i think you could be a professional writer. seriously

Man, this was long, but oh so worth it! This story was really heartwarming and I had a fuzzy warm feeling in the pit of my stomach as I read this! Great job!

This story makes my own fanfiction look like it was written by a five-year-old or something. It completely puts it to shame. It's so deep; so beautiful. I can tell that you really must have felt this story and been just as moved to write it as I just was to read it. "No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader." as Robert Frost said. You are an unbelievably talented writer! This is not only the best R/H fanfiction I've ever read, it's one of the best stories in general I've ever read, and from a Hermione-ish girl like me who's been reading tons of fiction books for years, that's saying something. I'm not exaggerating here. I was truly moved by this story. If you haven't thought about a career in writing, you should seriously consider it. No, wait, you MUST consider it. If you don't, you'll be robbing readers like me of wonderful books to read! You really should just come up with some original characters and such and make this fanfic into original fiction. I'm sure it would be a highly successful book.

BRAVO!! BRAVO!! i luv it! it was great! have you written anyothers?

now for some self promotion :) you should read my little fluffy fic "Under the Misltoe" staring everyones favorit 'should-be-but-they-don't-know-it-yet' couple.

Great fic, and keep writting!
EJ

*Wipes tear* No, I really did, just now. That was so...oh my gosh! There was a good bit of angst in there, enough to rival the amount of fluff. But there was a happy ending and now I'm adding this story to my Favorite Stories and you to my Favorite Authors. This was one of the greatest R/H fanfictions I've ever read that weren't written by miss Arabella. But it is up there with her fics, I must say.

I'm very sorry that I didn't review before, but I was just so wrapped up in the story...And I would write one of those exited reviews ("YEAH! THIS SO ROCKED! IT WAS SO GREAT!") but I was just so filled with that fluffy happiness, I couldn't help but let my happiness flow in a more smooth way. I really loved your story, it's one of the best, in my opinion. Although it may not actually happen in the books, because as JKR says, all of the books could be read comfortably by an eight-year-old. But that's another story, for this is the fandom, and in the fandom, we may do whatever we please. (Think Harry/Draco and Draco/Goblet)

To conclude my review, I would like to say that this is one of the sweetest, most romantic and beautifully written peice I have seen thus far at Fanfiction.net.

Hugs!
Meghan ^_^

Wow. That's all can say. That was much deeper than Rowling herself would have written.not even rt can tell it. That was just amazing. You took something, and analyzed it until there was nothing left to analyze. I love this story. THis just rocked.

That was excellent! This story was so wonderful, one of the best R/Hr stories I've read. It was original and had lots of feeling behind it. I'm definitly keeping this one in my favourites!