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Distant Halo
2005-04-06
ch 16, anon.
abuseLove the story so far and I really hope you finish the story soon. There is not enough Auron x Lulu stories out there and I am glad I found a few on this site but do wish there were more. You are a very good writer, keep up the good work.
rosimation
2005-01-17
ch 16,
abuseu can't be finished! please please juss continue the story! i luvv it! i want to know what happens next!
Seti
2004-10-05
ch 16, anon.
abuseI love this fanfic but why do you always take so long to update please hurry and update soon. I'm a huge Aulu fan so please carry on I want to know what will happen next.
Myles
2004-07-23
ch 16, anon.
abuseyou may have not ever heard of me, but I'm just a fan of FFX fan fics and came across your , wonderous story. I read the entire thing and I must say you do have talent and so this is a review so here it is

Story line 10\10
excellent story I think that pairing up Lulu with Auron was excellent and although you added Kai and Cess it became a great twist in the story however try to pace yourself when it comes to switch the point of views like have a limit to when to switch over

Grammer 9\10
I found your vocabulary great but the context you used it in was sometimes confusing but than agian i can become confused easily ;)

Personailties 10\10
what I mean by personalities is how well you captured the charcters well... personailty and well I thought it was great although you may have changed his\her personailty it was for the better

Overall 10\10
This was an exceddingly good story on my standtards and I enjoyed reading it. If you do not wish to respond to my review I understand

-Myles
Dee
2004-05-16
ch 16, anon.
abuseExcellent..I liked this. It didn't rush too much. Want to know what will happen next!
Poetrim
2004-02-09
ch 16,
abuseYay, soo great. ^^ More chapters! I cant wait!
Banks
2004-02-07
ch 16, anon.
abuseWonderful,really.
I hope to read the next chapter ASAP.
SlythMentalCase
2004-02-07
ch 16,
abuseThis chapter, as well as all the others, was very well written and a satisfaction to my crave. The only question I have is:
WHy are there Lulu Dolls int he Al Bhed Home?
Sephiroth.H
2004-02-04
ch 16, anon.
abuseHahahaha~You're So quickly this time~^_^Thanks a lot!
I 'm Really excited to c Gippal appear...4 Rikku!
K':Thanks 4 Not making us wait too long this time...Keep it!
Ashely:AH~Kai shan's Too poor in this chapter~~lol
Sephioth:"being dragged around by Tidus like a dog"?Bad Tidus!
QQTTBB:I agree...the author's...evil...
But I REALLY want to c what will happen next!
Mudan:Oh~It's Gippal saved Kai~Cool!Can't wait 4 next chappy~!
Agent Dream x
2004-02-02
ch 15,
abuseAgain- No flaws in this story aside from... THEY SHOULD APPEAR MORE OFTEN! Plese? For me? I'll give you a cookie~!
EDWORD
2004-02-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseYEAH~Another chapie~I eally love this FAnfic...Good writting,story,characters...The only problem is...You're Too Lazy updating!Do u know how long you had made me wait?You Evil Author!
Sephiroth.H
2004-02-02
ch 15, anon.
abuseAha~It's me reviewing!!
Love this chatpie,Can't wait to c more~~
And my friends have something to say 2:
K':haha!!At last!You 've always made us waiting so long!!
YX.shine:I love this chapter!hehe...because...so much Kai&Lulu...(don't hit me!!)Can't wait 4 more!!
TTYY:I only want to say...Update Sooner!
Karmina Scarheart
2004-01-28
ch 14,
abuseomg, it took me so LONG to find this story again! i had read it once, but then forgot to put it in my favorite stories list ^_^' i LOVE the story! keep going!
Agent Dream x
2004-01-27
ch 14,
abuseAMAZING! Please, write more! PLEASE!
Arinya
2004-01-23
ch 1,
abuseREally sweet, great, detailed writing. But I don't think Auron would ever make bodily contact like that.
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