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| Distant Halo 2005-04-06 ch 16, anon. | abuseLove the story so far and I really hope you finish the story soon. There is not enough Auron x Lulu stories out there and I am glad I found a few on this site but do wish there were more. You are a very good writer, keep up the good work. |
| rosimation 2005-01-17 ch 16, | abuseu can't be finished! please please juss continue the story! i luvv it! i want to know what happens next! |
| Seti 2004-10-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseI love this fanfic but why do you always take so long to update please hurry and update soon. I'm a huge Aulu fan so please carry on I want to know what will happen next. |
| Myles 2004-07-23 ch 16, anon. | abuseyou may have not ever heard of me, but I'm just a fan of FFX fan fics and came across your , wonderous story. I read the entire thing and I must say you do have talent and so this is a review so here it is Story line 10\10 excellent story I think that pairing up Lulu with Auron was excellent and although you added Kai and Cess it became a great twist in the story however try to pace yourself when it comes to switch the point of views like have a limit to when to switch over Grammer 9\10 I found your vocabulary great but the context you used it in was sometimes confusing but than agian i can become confused easily ;) Personailties 10\10 what I mean by personalities is how well you captured the charcters well... personailty and well I thought it was great although you may have changed his\her personailty it was for the better Overall 10\10 This was an exceddingly good story on my standtards and I enjoyed reading it. If you do not wish to respond to my review I understand -Myles |
| Dee 2004-05-16 ch 16, anon. | abuseExcellent..I liked this. It didn't rush too much. Want to know what will happen next! |
| Poetrim 2004-02-09 ch 16, | abuseYay, soo great. ^^ More chapters! I cant wait! |
| Banks 2004-02-07 ch 16, anon. | abuseWonderful,really. I hope to read the next chapter ASAP. |
| SlythMentalCase 2004-02-07 ch 16, | abuseThis chapter, as well as all the others, was very well written and a satisfaction to my crave. The only question I have is: WHy are there Lulu Dolls int he Al Bhed Home? |
| Sephiroth.H 2004-02-04 ch 16, anon. | abuseHahahaha~You're So quickly this time~^_^Thanks a lot! I 'm Really excited to c Gippal appear...4 Rikku! K':Thanks 4 Not making us wait too long this time...Keep it! Ashely:AH~Kai shan's Too poor in this chapter~~lol Sephioth:"being dragged around by Tidus like a dog"?Bad Tidus! QQTTBB:I agree...the author's...evil... But I REALLY want to c what will happen next! Mudan:Oh~It's Gippal saved Kai~Cool!Can't wait 4 next chappy~! |
| Agent Dream x 2004-02-02 ch 15, | abuseAgain- No flaws in this story aside from... THEY SHOULD APPEAR MORE OFTEN! Plese? For me? I'll give you a cookie~! |
| EDWORD 2004-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseYEAH~Another chapie~I eally love this FAnfic...Good writting,story,characters...The only problem is...You're Too Lazy updating!Do u know how long you had made me wait?You Evil Author! |
| Sephiroth.H 2004-02-02 ch 15, anon. | abuseAha~It's me reviewing!! Love this chatpie,Can't wait to c more~~ And my friends have something to say 2: K':haha!!At last!You 've always made us waiting so long!! YX.shine:I love this chapter!hehe...because...so much Kai&Lulu...(don't hit me!!)Can't wait 4 more!! TTYY:I only want to say...Update Sooner! |
| Karmina Scarheart 2004-01-28 ch 14, | abuseomg, it took me so LONG to find this story again! i had read it once, but then forgot to put it in my favorite stories list ^_^' i LOVE the story! keep going! |
| Agent Dream x 2004-01-27 ch 14, | abuseAMAZING! Please, write more! PLEASE! |
| Arinya 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseREally sweet, great, detailed writing. But I don't think Auron would ever make bodily contact like that. |