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mmooch
2008-05-20 . chapter 10
I loved this story and how natural it felt. Hope that you'll do a sequel.
Abbey06
2007-02-24 . chapter 10
Wow. The whole idea of this story was really interesting. I like how Lorelai and Jess made the truce and actually stuck to it. It was nice to see them being nice to each other, because, honestly, in the show, I always thought that they would eventually get along at one point, but they never did.
Of course, the LL interaction was great.
The whole story was good.
cywen69
2006-08-14 . chapter 10
THis was such a good story. I really enjoyed reading it. I only wish it had a little more L/L interaction on the bf/gf front. You took all that time to get them to agree to go out than all we got was a teeny little kiss goodnight. I was really hoping to read about their first date. I also think she should have kissed him in his hospital room. One good romantic kiss would have been nice. The story itself was well written and thought out. It was a good ond original concept too. It just left me wanting more.

Wendy
Melin
2005-06-19 . chapter 10
Nice story! I loved the Lorelai Jess peace offering... But you HAVE to write a sequel! please!
Copperboom
2004-09-23 . chapter 10
Cute story! I only just found your stuff and I like it a lot. I'm all about anything with Luke in it. I like that you worked out the Jess and Lorelai thing too, worrying about Luke is probably the thing that would actually make them able to stand each other!
Joanna
2004-05-13 . chapter 10
I have just read your "The Fall" fan fiction and I wanted to write and express my appreciation of a well-thought of story. The characterisations were spot on and I was really amused to see that Luke asked Lorelai to a movie with similar words to the Last week fights, This week tights episode.
My only criticism is how quickly it ended. Keep on writing!
Erin Kaye Hashet
2004-04-01 . chapter 10
Awesome story! Very cute and funny. I loved the part with the teacher at the end. I hope you write more than just fanfic!
coolchick207
2003-04-22 . chapter 10
Oh - is so sweet! Yay! Loved it! Sequal?
Always, Annalise
Me
2002-12-05 . chapter 10
i love this story and i need more desperately! please write more!
sarahgrace
2002-09-28 . chapter 10
I really like this story! I especially liked the Lorelai/Jess friendship aspect...when they sang the song together at the end...that was really cute!
Ice Princess3
2002-09-14 . chapter 10
That was a perfect ending. Great story, can't wait for your next one!
sweetangel251
2002-09-13 . chapter 10
Wow... that was a truly excellent fic and I look forward to reading more from you.
Bull
2002-09-13 . chapter 10
Aww, that's the end? Oh well, that's alright. I loved the whole thing! Are you planning on writing more L/L? Please?
Parvulissula
2002-09-13 . chapter 10
Aww, it was really good! And really sweet! So cute :) I'm dying of Java Junkie overload here! I was all angry cuz of the rating thing, but now I'm happy and smiley :) great stuff!
Melissa Larkin
2002-09-13 . chapter 10
I really like this story! I'm glad that Luke and Lorelai are going to be together and I like the Jess/Lorelai friendship. The part with Jess telling Trina that Luke "prefers the fellas" was hysterical! :) Keep up the great work. :)
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