Reviews for The Innocence of Youth

Reviews For: The Innocence of Youth

Republic-Of-Heaven 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseI know this story is from ages ago, but it's good! Please continue. ROH
Bloody Dead Rose 2003-04-10 ch 1,	abuseI like your fic but you havem't updated in like, 9 months! R u going too?
artemismoon91 2002-11-30 ch 1,	abuseKitty, you are one of the best writers I have read fan fiction from. No one has wrote a story about Arty's past and made it really impressive and totally original. Please continue very soon!!
Blue Yeti 2002-10-01 ch 1,	abuseI can't believe I haven't reviewed this. This was one of the first fics I read when I came to AF and it gave me great hope for what AF fandom might have to offer an obsessed gal like me. For someone who is always incouraging people to get to the point all ready, you have a suprising skill for staying with the emotions and feelings surrounding an event rather than the "must have Swarzeneger action." style of writing you seem to want to encourage. Slow and steady stories leave more room for thought and they are more impactful on the reader. I really like how you have risen to the challenge of writing a lost scene because those are the best ones really. The difference between reading a stupid fic where Harry defeats Voldemort without a fight for some strange reason usually relating to a prophesy, and reading Nemesis' 'I am Lord Voldemort' nad discovering exactly why Tom Riddle became evil. Sorry, I refer everything ficcy back to the HP fandom because I think everyone will agree that that is by far the most through fandom available. I like the fact that this is going absolutely nowhere except exploring the situations which may ahve made Artemis the way he is. Very ambitious but you don't really ahve much to live up to because nothing else like it exists here. Please continue this because it is a very inspiring idea. If you can pull this idea off you may just change the quality of all the fics here because of the idea of doing something different. You don't even have to do it well but you have to do it to set the foundations for another 'different' styled fic. Please continue this because of the impact it might have. Do you know that the name 'Evans' as Lily Potter4's maiden name was actually first used in a fic by Katie Bell called 'Lily'. It was one of the first fics and look at how much that has influenced teh fandom. J.K has confermed that Lily's name is Evans. the power of the fans. So... no pressure, huh? Sorry for that but I would really like to see some changes as to how people look at AF fics. Keep Writing ~Blue Yeti PS. I haven't quite decided which button down here I'm going to click on. Author... story... Author... story... AUTHOR!
anon14 2002-09-07 ch 1,	abusehi kitty. thanx for reviewing my artemis fic. i had no idea that it sounded mary-sueish. thanx for warning me. i will improve Shakira's personality so that she is more Shakira than Mary-sue. never read a plot like this b4. could get boring if u don't liven it up. okies, bye bye waves
Stardust Firebolt 2002-08-19 ch 1,	abuseWhy can't Artemis go to MY school?!
'ji 2002-08-17 ch 1, anon.	abusekewwwwl. li'l arty!!!! wheee!!! cough i mean. i'm already interested and can't wait to see little artemis. i bet he was a tiny midget too. ooohhh i can't wait. please pretty please with a cherry on top update fast!!!! kay then, night. wait no, morning. wut ever
lala 2002-08-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseaww please come up with the next chapter soon. I wanna see little Arty ^_^
Red Moon Kree 2002-08-17 ch 1,	abuseoooooo cooooool more!
Nervous Neuron 2002-08-17 ch 1,	abuseMini Arty? I wanna know more...
BountyHunterX 2002-08-16 ch 1,	abuseI thought that was a very good fanfic of Artemis Fowl. I thought both of the books were very good. You should continue the story and tell the readers about what happens next. Keep writing ^_^
SerenaArythusa 2002-08-15 ch 1,	abuseYES!!!! A chibi Arty tale!!! And...NO HOLLY!!! HAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! You MUST write more!!!!
takingtheblade 2002-08-15 ch 1,	abuseTee hee. I soooo can't wait for more! I really wanna see a 5-year-old Artemis :P

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