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2009-07-05 . chapter 2
Please update.I know you said you won't continue,but please do!And what the hell's a boffin?
ht4eva
2008-12-13 . chapter 2
Aw! Poor Arty!
~Eva
Silver Sarra
2007-05-06 . chapter 2
I am sure this is way too late to have any effect but I think this story has a lot of potential and I love your exploration of Artemis' early years. You gotta wonder how exactly he turned out how he did... anyway, please continue as much appreciation. Your fans are waiting!
xL4stBr3ath
2006-12-27 . chapter 2
if onli u could update faster
Imcannedfruit
2006-09-26 . chapter 2
is this going to be updated?
derangedfangirl
2006-08-18 . chapter 2
I suppose this is unlikely to be continued... but I REALLY wish you would!! This is very good, and the characterization is definately on!
karin1004
2006-06-18 . chapter 2
Wah!
Please update!
Mulch Diggums
2005-12-03 . chapter 2
Really good! Now- DON'T LAUGH i'm writin gmy own fanfic about Artemis's exploits in kidnergarten! (This was before I even heard of your fanfic, I'm not stealing ideas!!) I think I like your's better then mine, keep up the good work!!
imensane@imensane.com
2005-07-10 . chapter 2
very cute update once in a while will ya u no what i think u should make a sequel to when they're in high school 00
-imensane
Aura of Chaos
2005-06-18 . chapter 2
Col. Artys first day of school. is he gonna make friends?possibly edie? enemys? possibly most of the class? especially michael? UPDATE! UPDATE !
update ! uPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE... Thanks :P
Mister Jay
2005-05-07 . chapter 2
This is really interesting. Truthfully, I've never mused on Artemis's Kindergarten years. I assumed he was homeschooled or something. Very original plot, very IC characters, and all that jazz. I hope you write more!

Dark Dreams,
Lady of Faerie
Eva Evans
2005-04-12 . chapter 2
Hiya! I just realised that i havent reviewed this story, even though its been sitting on my favs for like ever. Anyway, heres my thoughts on it in a string of random words: brilliant, touching, cute, powerful, truthful (bullying and whatnot) and well you know, i really like it. Please Update! (I know how annoying this is to be told to continously update, cause i know that i am being pestered too, but they arent getting an update cause i've writers block! Yippee!)

Anyway, great work, keep it up and please write another chapter :grin:
Zappenduster
2004-10-19 . chapter 2
you haven't updated since two years!
still getting reviews should be a reason to continue with the story ;)
i think artemis' "childhood" is interesting, and you started interesting. feels like i'm standing next to artemis, for it's wonderfully written. please go on!
liz
2004-04-23 . chapter 2
this apperes to be a 'forgotten' fic...shame!
the-faith-less-one
2004-03-22 . chapter 2
Cute lil' Artemis. Are you going to write any more??
tartuffe
2004-03-15 . chapter 2
;_; ur not continuing this, aren't you?
The OddBird
2004-03-12 . chapter 2
Hey, you posted this on another fanfiction site, I thought you copied at first, than realized it was by the same person. Soo0o0o0o good fic, artemis could be a little more cold, but he's cute(kiddish way) Aye, stupid teacher all kindergarten teachers are airheads...believe me.
DemonOfShadow
2004-03-12 . chapter 2
O... Arty is gonna be in trouble... and his bodygaurd is nowhere in sight... You did a good job on the story, I can actually picture the 5 year old artemis in my head, still a bit cute(In a little kid way)but starting to develope a vampire smile. Onward Ho!
Daae
2003-11-02 . chapter 2
hurry with this please! i really can't wait to read the next chapter... i hope Butler comes and beats Michael up!
Earth Borne
2003-06-23 . chapter 2
Please wrie more stories!! I realy like the way you described Artemis's school, except Artemis might have been more cold and unflinchable.
Aillanna-Took
2003-06-04 . chapter 2
This is lovely. It really is. I look forward to more. Yours, by the way, is, in my recall, my first Artemis Fowl fic. I really am enoying your fic. Please write more soon!! ^.~
flyingphilosoper
2003-04-29 . chapter 2
This is good, but one question; if these kids are five why don’t they know their letters? Everyone I know who’s been through the British or Irish education system (including me) could read by the age of four, at least, five at the very, very latest. Please clear this up. I don’t mean to flame you this is just meant as constructive criticism. Please take it the right way.
flyingphilosopher
2003-04-29 . chapter 2
This is quite good, but one question; If these children are five why don't they know their letters? I was reciting the alfabet by 2and1/2 and everyone I know learnt to read by four at least, in the British education system.
Skittles the Sugar Fairy
2003-04-08 . chapter 2
yikes, poor artemis, i hope u get some more up soon! i really like this so far!
Kisara the Angel of Music
2003-02-27 . chapter 2
To tell the truth I found that even though Artemis is at such a young age he was really out of character. I doubt that his father would want him to go to school without Butler and that Artemis would have been a whole lot ruder. I can understand where you are coming from but I really think you should make Artemis act more like himself instead of some dimwitted little kid. On the other hand I found this really cute and adorable. To be honest I liked it a lot and I DO think that you should continue it.

~Yukina~
Reader
2003-02-17 . chapter 2
*sob* Poor Artemis!! WAH!
TheCrustyCrusader
2003-02-15 . chapter 2
Oh!
That was so good! I want to hear more about what happens to little Arty! Please write more!
Blue Yeti
2003-01-28 . chapter 2
You n eed to update this one as well. And if you don't I'm going to bonk you over the head and take away your Hugo. AND your Elijah. *AND* your plushy Grub. And then I'm going to poke you!

Sorry, it's just... you spend so much time between each chapter of everything. And I wanna have more Arty who is rejected and disrespected.
Skywise
2002-12-09 . chapter 2
Very nice so far. I really like your character development. Edie has a chance of becoming a Mary Sue so watch that. Other than that, I like this very much. I hope you decide to continue it.
Cherry Nectar
2002-11-12 . chapter 2
Hehehehehe!
Cute widdle evil 5 year olds!
Even though he is evil - you really can show his good side, can't you!
Windswift
2002-11-11 . chapter 2
Please write more!!!!
Thundermage
2002-10-30 . chapter 2
This is really good. You have gone to a part in Artemis's life that I haven't seen anyone else go to. Most people go to Artemis's present life or future life, while you went a step farther(or should I say back since it's his past?) and have gone to his past which may explain the behavior he has now. This is a very well written story and would like more of the same. Come out with the next chapter soon!
Renata (who is to lazy to sign in)
2002-10-29 . chapter 2
This is great! Keep going, I like the side of Artemis that you're showing.
Overlord Guu Sama
2002-10-20 . chapter 2
Oooooooohh very interesting I want to read a lot more of this story. When will you up-date!? I want to read more ^-^!
weirdo
2002-09-03 . chapter 2
This is adorable. Please write more.
Athalia
2002-09-03 . chapter 2
Nice fic! There'll be more, RIGHT?! ^_^
MAD_Clown
2002-09-01 . chapter 2
Very interesting, picturing Artemis's past.
me
2002-09-01 . chapter 2
make more
ChaChaChica
2002-08-29 . chapter 2
Dang it! why won't it let me log in? Oh well...That was so cute! I love it! Please add more soon!! Please??
anon14
2002-08-27 . chapter 2
please write more! this is really good.
Takami
2002-08-22 . chapter 2
Aww, poor little Artemis! Evil 5 year olds... I like the "Artemis is...different." line
cacter
2002-08-21 . chapter 2
nice story, and realistic settings and people. keep writing, can't wait for the third chapter to see what happens to Artemis at school, and how he'll deal with it.
minute majesty
2002-08-20 . chapter 2
I really like this... However, I cannot say much about it because i am only starting to read Artemis Fowl. But this is very good, and I'd like to read more.^_^
lala
2002-08-19 . chapter 2
humph! kids this days...lol nice chapter. Poor Arty T.T oh well nice chapter hurry with the next chapter. ^_^
takingtheblade
2002-08-19 . chapter 2
Awww! Poor little Arty! Anyway, I really liked this chapter! Keep up the good work!
Stardust Firebolt
2002-08-19 . chapter 2
I like how this story's turning out to be very realistic. Keep on writing.
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