Wow. That's really good. Please continue.

For some anoying reason my computer isn't letting me log in...

But never mind that.

This is awsome! What ever happened to chapter 2? I mean jeez you wrote this in '02! You just gave up on it after one chapter? *pouts* I hate it when people do that! And your such a great writer! *shakes a finger at you* Grrr you should continue this! *sigh* I realize that it's been nine years and that's hardly likely... but still! You really should. This is great.

omg this is the first ever af fanfic and it's awesome! why did you start if you didn't wanna finish it? please. just a teeny update?

Writ more!

Please update.I know you said you won't continue,but please do!And what the hell's a boffin?

Aw! Poor Arty!

~Eva

I am sure this is way too late to have any effect but I think this story has a lot of potential and I love your exploration of Artemis' early years. You gotta wonder how exactly he turned out how he did... anyway, please continue as much appreciation. Your fans are waiting!

if onli u could update faster

is this going to be updated?

I suppose this is unlikely to be continued... but I REALLY wish you would! This is very good, and the characterization is definately on!

Wah!

Please update!

Really good! Now- DON'T LAUGH i'm writin gmy own fanfic about Artemis's exploits in kidnergarten! (This was before I even heard of your fanfic, I'm not stealing ideas!) I think I like your's better then mine, keep up the good work!

very cute update once in a while will ya u no what i think u should make a sequel to when they're in high school 00

-imensane

Col. Artys first day of school. is he gonna make friends?possibly edie? enemys? possibly most of the class? especially michael? UPDATE! UPDATE !

update ! uPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE... Thanks :P

This is really interesting. Truthfully, I've never mused on Artemis's Kindergarten years. I assumed he was homeschooled or something. Very original plot, very IC characters, and all that jazz. I hope you write more!

Dark Dreams,

Lady of Faerie

Hiya! I just realised that i havent reviewed this story, even though its been sitting on my favs for like ever. Anyway, heres my thoughts on it in a string of random words: brilliant, touching, cute, powerful, truthful (bullying and whatnot) and well you know, i really like it. Please Update! (I know how annoying this is to be told to continously update, cause i know that i am being pestered too, but they arent getting an update cause i've writers block! Yippee!)

Anyway, great work, keep it up and please write another chapter :grin:

you haven't updated since two years!

still getting reviews should be a reason to continue with the story ;)

i think artemis' "childhood" is interesting, and you started interesting. feels like i'm standing next to artemis, for it's wonderfully written. please go on!

this apperes to be a 'forgotten' fic...shame!

Cute lil' Artemis. Are you going to write any more?

;_; ur not continuing this, aren't you?

Hey, you posted this on another fanfiction site, I thought you copied at first, than realized it was by the same person. Soo0o0o0o good fic, artemis could be a little more cold, but he's cute(kiddish way) Aye, stupid teacher all kindergarten teachers are airheads...believe me.

O... Arty is gonna be in trouble... and his bodygaurd is nowhere in sight... You did a good job on the story, I can actually picture the 5 year old artemis in my head, still a bit cute(In a little kid way)but starting to develope a vampire smile. Onward Ho!

hurry with this please! i really can't wait to read the next chapter... i hope Butler comes and beats Michael up!

Please wrie more stories! I realy like the way you described Artemis's school, except Artemis might have been more cold and unflinchable.

This is lovely. It really is. I look forward to more. Yours, by the way, is, in my recall, my first Artemis Fowl fic. I really am enoying your fic. Please write more soon! ^.~

This is good, but one question; if these kids are five why don’t they know their letters? Everyone I know who’s been through the British or Irish education system (including me) could read by the age of four, at least, five at the very, very latest. Please clear this up. I don’t mean to flame you this is just meant as constructive criticism. Please take it the right way.

This is quite good, but one question; If these children are five why don't they know their letters? I was reciting the alfabet by 2and1/2 and everyone I know learnt to read by four at least, in the British education system.

yikes, poor artemis, i hope u get some more up soon! i really like this so far!

To tell the truth I found that even though Artemis is at such a young age he was really out of character. I doubt that his father would want him to go to school without Butler and that Artemis would have been a whole lot ruder. I can understand where you are coming from but I really think you should make Artemis act more like himself instead of some dimwitted little kid. On the other hand I found this really cute and adorable. To be honest I liked it a lot and I DO think that you should continue it.

~Yukina~

*sob* Poor Artemis! WAH!

Oh!

That was so good! I want to hear more about what happens to little Arty! Please write more!

You n eed to update this one as well. And if you don't I'm going to bonk you over the head and take away your Hugo. AND your Elijah. *AND* your plushy Grub. And then I'm going to poke you!

Sorry, it's just... you spend so much time between each chapter of everything. And I wanna have more Arty who is rejected and disrespected.

Very nice so far. I really like your character development. Edie has a chance of becoming a Mary Sue so watch that. Other than that, I like this very much. I hope you decide to continue it.

Hehehehehe!

Cute widdle evil 5 year olds!

Even though he is evil - you really can show his good side, can't you!

Please write more!

This is really good. You have gone to a part in Artemis's life that I haven't seen anyone else go to. Most people go to Artemis's present life or future life, while you went a step farther(or should I say back since it's his past?) and have gone to his past which may explain the behavior he has now. This is a very well written story and would like more of the same. Come out with the next chapter soon!

This is great! Keep going, I like the side of Artemis that you're showing.

Oooooooohh very interesting I want to read a lot more of this story. When will you up-date! I want to read more ^-^!

This is adorable. Please write more.

Nice fic! There'll be more, RIGHT? ^_^

Very interesting, picturing Artemis's past.

make more

Dang it! why won't it let me log in? Oh well...That was so cute! I love it! Please add more soon! Please?

please write more! this is really good.

Aww, poor little Artemis! Evil 5 year olds... I like the "Artemis is...different." line

nice story, and realistic settings and people. keep writing, can't wait for the third chapter to see what happens to Artemis at school, and how he'll deal with it.

I really like this... However, I cannot say much about it because i am only starting to read Artemis Fowl. But this is very good, and I'd like to read more.^_^

humph! kids this days...lol nice chapter. Poor Arty T.T oh well nice chapter hurry with the next chapter. ^_^

Awww! Poor little Arty! Anyway, I really liked this chapter! Keep up the good work!

I like how this story's turning out to be very realistic. Keep on writing.