Reviews for The Innocence of Youth

Reviews For: The Innocence of Youth

Silver Sarra 2007-05-06 ch 2,	abuseI am sure this is way too late to have any effect but I think this story has a lot of potential and I love your exploration of Artemis' early years. You gotta wonder how exactly he turned out how he did... anyway, please continue as much appreciation. Your fans are waiting!
xL4stBr3ath 2006-12-27 ch 2,	abuseif onli u could update faster
Imcannedfruit 2006-09-26 ch 2,	abuseis this going to be updated?
derangedfangirl 2006-08-18 ch 2,	abuseI suppose this is unlikely to be continued... but I REALLY wish you would!! This is very good, and the characterization is definately on!
karin1004 2006-06-18 ch 2,	abuseWah! Please update!
Mulch Diggums 2005-12-03 ch 2,	abuseReally good! Now- DON'T LAUGH i'm writin gmy own fanfic about Artemis's exploits in kidnergarten! (This was before I even heard of your fanfic, I'm not stealing ideas!!) I think I like your's better then mine, keep up the good work!!
imensane@imensane.com 2005-07-10 ch 2, anon.	abusevery cute update once in a while will ya u no what i think u should make a sequel to when they're in high school 00 -imensane
Aura of Chaos 2005-06-18 ch 2,	abuseCol. Artys first day of school. is he gonna make friends?possibly edie? enemys? possibly most of the class? especially michael? UPDATE! UPDATE ! update ! uPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE... Thanks :P
Lady of Faerie 2005-05-07 ch 2,	abuseThis is really interesting. Truthfully, I've never mused on Artemis's Kindergarten years. I assumed he was homeschooled or something. Very original plot, very IC characters, and all that jazz. I hope you write more! Dark Dreams, Lady of Faerie
Eva Evans 2005-04-12 ch 2,	abuseHiya! I just realised that i havent reviewed this story, even though its been sitting on my favs for like ever. Anyway, heres my thoughts on it in a string of random words: brilliant, touching, cute, powerful, truthful (bullying and whatnot) and well you know, i really like it. Please Update! (I know how annoying this is to be told to continously update, cause i know that i am being pestered too, but they arent getting an update cause i've writers block! Yippee!) Anyway, great work, keep it up and please write another chapter :grin:
Zappenduster 2004-10-19 ch 2,	abuseyou haven't updated since two years! still getting reviews should be a reason to continue with the story ;) i think artemis' "childhood" is interesting, and you started interesting. feels like i'm standing next to artemis, for it's wonderfully written. please go on!
liz 2004-04-23 ch 2, anon.	abusethis apperes to be a 'forgotten' fic...shame!
the-faith-less-one 2004-03-22 ch 2,	abuseCute lil' Artemis. Are you going to write any more??
enfant d'automne 2004-03-15 ch 2,	abuse;_; ur not continuing this, aren't you?
The OddBird 2004-03-12 ch 2,	abuseHey, you posted this on another fanfiction site, I thought you copied at first, than realized it was by the same person. Soo0o0o0o good fic, artemis could be a little more cold, but he's cute(kiddish way) Aye, stupid teacher all kindergarten teachers are airheads...believe me.
DemonOfShadow 2004-03-12 ch 2,	abuseO... Arty is gonna be in trouble... and his bodygaurd is nowhere in sight... You did a good job on the story, I can actually picture the 5 year old artemis in my head, still a bit cute(In a little kid way)but starting to develope a vampire smile. Onward Ho!
Daae 2003-11-02 ch 2,	abusehurry with this please! i really can't wait to read the next chapter... i hope Butler comes and beats Michael up!
Earth Borne 2003-06-23 ch 2, anon.	abusePlease wrie more stories!! I realy like the way you described Artemis's school, except Artemis might have been more cold and unflinchable.
Aillanna-Took 2003-06-04 ch 2,	abuseThis is lovely. It really is. I look forward to more. Yours, by the way, is, in my recall, my first Artemis Fowl fic. I really am enoying your fic. Please write more soon!! ^.~
flyingphilosoper 2003-04-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is good, but one question; if these kids are five why don’t they know their letters? Everyone I know who’s been through the British or Irish education system (including me) could read by the age of four, at least, five at the very, very latest. Please clear this up. I don’t mean to flame you this is just meant as constructive criticism. Please take it the right way.
flyingphilosopher 2003-04-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is quite good, but one question; If these children are five why don't they know their letters? I was reciting the alfabet by 2and1/2 and everyone I know learnt to read by four at least, in the British education system.
Skittles the Sugar Fairy 2003-04-08 ch 2,	abuseyikes, poor artemis, i hope u get some more up soon! i really like this so far!
Eloise Moonbright 2003-02-27 ch 2,	abuseTo tell the truth I found that even though Artemis is at such a young age he was really out of character. I doubt that his father would want him to go to school without Butler and that Artemis would have been a whole lot ruder. I can understand where you are coming from but I really think you should make Artemis act more like himself instead of some dimwitted little kid. On the other hand I found this really cute and adorable. To be honest I liked it a lot and I DO think that you should continue it. ~Yukina~
Reader 2003-02-17 ch 2, anon.	abusesob Poor Artemis!! WAH!
TheCrustyCrusader 2003-02-15 ch 2,	abuseOh! That was so good! I want to hear more about what happens to little Arty! Please write more!
Blue Yeti 2003-01-28 ch 2,	abuseYou n eed to update this one as well. And if you don't I'm going to bonk you over the head and take away your Hugo. AND your Elijah. AND your plushy Grub. And then I'm going to poke you! Sorry, it's just... you spend so much time between each chapter of everything. And I wanna have more Arty who is rejected and disrespected.
Skywise 2002-12-09 ch 2,	abuseVery nice so far. I really like your character development. Edie has a chance of becoming a Mary Sue so watch that. Other than that, I like this very much. I hope you decide to continue it.
Cherry Nectar 2002-11-12 ch 2,	abuseHehehehehe! Cute widdle evil 5 year olds! Even though he is evil - you really can show his good side, can't you!
Windswift 2002-11-11 ch 2,	abusePlease write more!!!!
Thundermage 2002-10-30 ch 2,	abuseThis is really good. You have gone to a part in Artemis's life that I haven't seen anyone else go to. Most people go to Artemis's present life or future life, while you went a step farther(or should I say back since it's his past?) and have gone to his past which may explain the behavior he has now. This is a very well written story and would like more of the same. Come out with the next chapter soon!
Renata (who is to lazy to s... 2002-10-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is great! Keep going, I like the side of Artemis that you're showing.
Overlord Guu Sama 2002-10-20 ch 2,	abuseOooooooohh very interesting I want to read a lot more of this story. When will you up-date!? I want to read more ^-^!
weirdo 2002-09-03 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is adorable. Please write more.
Athalia 2002-09-03 ch 2,	abuseNice fic! There'll be more, RIGHT?! ^_^
MAD_Clown 2002-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseVery interesting, picturing Artemis's past.
me 2002-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusemake more
ChaChaChica 2002-08-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseDang it! why won't it let me log in? Oh well...That was so cute! I love it! Please add more soon!! Please??
anon14 2002-08-27 ch 2,	abuseplease write more! this is really good.
Takami 2002-08-22 ch 2,	abuseAww, poor little Artemis! Evil 5 year olds... I like the "Artemis is...different." line
cacter 2002-08-21 ch 2,	abusenice story, and realistic settings and people. keep writing, can't wait for the third chapter to see what happens to Artemis at school, and how he'll deal with it.
minute majesty 2002-08-20 ch 2,	abuseI really like this... However, I cannot say much about it because i am only starting to read Artemis Fowl. But this is very good, and I'd like to read more.^_^
lala 2002-08-19 ch 2, anon.	abusehumph! kids this days...lol nice chapter. Poor Arty T.T oh well nice chapter hurry with the next chapter. ^_^
takingtheblade 2002-08-19 ch 2,	abuseAwww! Poor little Arty! Anyway, I really liked this chapter! Keep up the good work!
Stardust Firebolt 2002-08-19 ch 2,	abuseI like how this story's turning out to be very realistic. Keep on writing.

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