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Reviews For: Cherished Smiles

Kats
2002-08-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was great! I really love it.. but are you going to leave it there? oh please do another chapter! put them together! =)
magical me
2002-08-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was a really good counterpoint to Sweet Torture. I love reading two stories of the same events from different characters' points of view.

You've got Remus well in character here - sweet and selfless but watchful and wary, holding himself back far too much, at the same time. Poor baby.

I relly hope you're planning a resolution to all this angsting.
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