I'm sorry, but that had no detail whatsoever. You took every event that happened in the game, added a little of what you wanted - mainly Chrono speaking - and rushed right on through. You took what they said, put it in, and hardly anything else.
I'm sorry, but this comes damn close to horrid. Please, please put more effort into this.

NOT ENOUGH MALLETS! MALLETS DESERVE MORE APPRECIATION! MALLETS RULZ AND YOU KNOW IT! MALLETS RULZ! EVERYTHING WILL BOW DOWN AT THE FEET OF MALLETS! INCLUDING TOILETS! TOILETS WILL FEEL THEIR INFERIORITY (for once, do you know how snobby toilets get?) AND BOW DOWN TO KISS THE FEET OF MALLETS! THAT GOES FOR EVERYTHING THAT'S BREATHING! INCLUDING DESK LAMPS! MALLETS SHALL RULE THE WORLD! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! MOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HEHEHEHEHE!

Chrono speaks! Yay!