It being Tokimi's fault Ranma got that power brings new meaning to the phrase "you reap what you sow."

I have only one thing to say...good story

I have to tell that this is one of the best stories that I have ever read. You have managed a very good mix in each of the components of the story.

I have an issue in chapter 2. You don't just go ooc with Nabiki's character when Ranma's getting ready to leave Nerima you shatter her character. The moment with Cologne where she just says a few words and doesn't even question what's in it for Cologne just ignores her curiosity or need for information. You don't even have her mentally question motive and decide to keep her peace. She just accepts that Ranma's now an ally to the Amazons and doesn't even ask "What's the catch" only "Uh yeah sure." Which in any situation unless maybe mid ** or last moment of the apocalypse with a deity ** her out and it being heavily sarcastic I just can't see it fitting.

Well on word to read the other chapters.

Daniel Thomas Stack
Spokavriel @ yahoo . com

Great Story!!

Whoa, how have I missed this gem. Thanks for writing it.

Interesting story and I enjoyed it so far. One small nitpick. Your style involves a lot of repetition from different viewpoints. Once something has happened in the story, seeing it again from a different viewpoint gets very tedious and doesn't really add to the story.

i have alwes loved this story wright a contuasion pls

Hey man! In the past I reviewed this story, and even had your site in my Favorites. But the reason I'm doing this is because, since it seems you haven't received my e-mail, is to communicate to you that all the links of the Light Hawk War in your site are non-functional. Each one show a 404 error from Geocities. I think you should see about it.

Later!

Greetings to thee, Chaos Lord. I wish to congragulat thee on this stuning work. I also wish to sugest a sequal to this. It would be wonderous if you did. Haveing said this I must be on my way as it is 12:34am and I i have Studant Assesment Programs today. Ja Ne!

Great ending and epilogue. It's nice to see an
author finish a story!

*sniff* normally you would see me acting insane rather than showing my emotions... Aw, what the heck! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Thanks for completing the fic! Though I am rather disappointed that the epilogue was rather short and you did not go into detail about everobody else... Anyway, hope to see more of your works in the future.

Hello again Chaos Lord i sent you a e-mail about this fic months ago and i am very thankfull that you finished this fic it is a great read even with so little fights so you should be happy and i look forward to more of you fic's in the future you seem to have a nac for ranma cross overs mabye the next one you do will have more fights good luck.

*sniff* Ah, it's been a long, wonderful ride. I'm almost sad to see this fic come to it's conclusion. This is one of those rare, beautiful fics that imprints itself on your very heart, mind, and soul. Carry on, mon ami. Carry on.

With sincerest respects and admiration,
Night Hunter, Paladin of the Knights of Common Sense, Avatar of the Kami of Chaos

Congratulations on a job well done. This is was great fic to read as it went along all the way to end. I not seen many fics of this size manage to survive until the end.
I have enjoyed reading this fic and look foward to any future fics that you may write.