Now this, is a well wrtitten humor fic. Raziel manages to be himself but with downplayed angst. Nicely done! It's not stupid or trying too hard to stay to the story, it's good!

I was searching around in your stories for the first instance where Raz meets Kurt. I was hoping for some sort of interaction between the two. *pout* The two seem to resemble each other, it's strange that they would know about each other but not have any interaction, or have a more blatant lack of interaction like they're avoiding each other. I'll comment again later about the core story, I promise.

Another great story from our Angel. The last chapter was a nice twist. Will Lupa ever change Raziel like that again? And even if his looks are restored, does he still consume souls? Sorry, I tried to do this without asking questions, but I couldn't.
Cool story. Bob the vampire made me laugh. And otherwise it was beautifully written as always. Are you even capable of doing anything badly?

Read it AGAIN today. :)

This is sweet - I love the way you expressed their interaction in what could have been an awkward scene, especially the reference to their respective natures (vamp and werewolf). I think all the growling and purring set it off nicely too!

Just wondering (not critiising, 'cos it works) why you decided to write this chapter in the present tense when all the rest were in the past?

*wanders off to read it again (just to look at the tenses, obviously)* ; )

Aww. That was lurvely. Glad I got to see how they started out. Pity the image inducer got fried tho ...

I nearly fell of my chair laughing at Kain covered in candyfloss, and the trail of decapitated chocolate bunnies was a great touch.

*heads back to see what other Angel fics she hasn't read yet*

Heh! I started reading this at work, but I got to the point where I couldn't stifle the giggles any more and ran out the door.

I love your humour almost as much as your angst!

Funny - I like it!!!!!!!

~Freja

Cool story as always Wolf! Knew you wouldn't let me down!
More please **big grins otherwise I'll pine away! *goes to shrivel up*

Good! Great ending! I like it! Kain and chocolate bunnies, I never thought I'd see the day. The marble thing was great! *throws Vladimir's Angel a Raz plushie*

(GoT, Freja & Donovan have been watchin the procedings with interest)

GoT: Awwwwwwwww, init sweet!

Freja: I thought you said he was back to normal?

Donovan: Dad's wierd. Anywho, i TOLD you he had a girlfriend.

GoT: Never doubted you for a second Donny. Hey, why don't we go and say hi?

Freja & Donovan: Okay! (All 3 drop down from their hiding place right in frount of the couple)

GoT: Hiya Raz!

Lupa: ARGH! Who are these people!?

Donovan: Hello dad!

Raziel: Hey, where'd you three come from!?

Freja: We were watching you.

Raziel: (Slightly anoyed) And it never crossed your mind to help?

GoT: (Dismisive wave of her hand) You were doing so well by yourself.

Donovan: (giggles) You hit Kain in the trousers!

Lupa: Raz? Who are these people?

Raziel: Freinds of mine. Girls, this is Lupa.

GoT: Pleased to meet ya. I'm Guardian of Tears.

Freja: Freja, charmed.

Lupa: Err, hi?

Donovan: And i'm Donovan, we've meet before.

Lupa: We have? (Thinks for a minute) Wait. . .Dad? You're that little furball!

Freja: I'm impressed with you Lupa.

Lupa: Huh?

Freja: Not many people would get involved with someone who has children from a previous relationship.

Lupa: 0_o (I think she's getting a little confused)

GoT: Ra-zi-el?

Raziel: (Narrows eyes) Yes?

GoT: You're not going strait after Kain?

Raziel: No.

GoT: Good (picks up Donovan and dumps him in Raziel's arms) Then you can spend some quality time with your son.

Raziel: But-I-Hey!

GoT: You don't spend enought time with him as it is, besides, myself & the AhealNm'Is are getting sick of you dumping him on us while you go off and have fun (wags finger under his nose) it's time you faced up to your parental responisbilities (sp?) Really, what would No say?

Lupa: No?

Raziel: Donovan's mother, dead. Anyway, now that's settled i'm going for a drink, come on Freja. (strides off through the warp gate)

Freja: (waves) Nice to have met you Lupa. (goes through the gate.

Lupa: Why didn't you say something? Now we have to look after him! Who are the AhealNm'Is by the way?

Raziel: I didn't say anything 'cos Guardian & Freja are sort of gods and the AhealNm'Is are werewolves from Nosgoth, Donovan lives with them. she's right, thought, i don't spend enoght time with him as it is.

Lupa: DAMN!

Donovan: We're gonna have fun!

*~*~*~*~*~*

Shame the fic had to end but to quote Death.

'SOME THINGS END.'

Anywho, maybe that could be your next fic (imagins Don rampaging around Lupa's house & smirks) or maybe not.

hummm, maybe you could do SR2? looking forward to the next one anyway.

Ahhhhhh! You have to write more. You have to! You're such a great author! Write another story...though I don't really know what about.... *blinks* Twinkies!

Rahab: *rubbing his sinuses* Please cut back on the sugar intake, Cat. It's really driving us insane.

That was so cool! Coolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcoolcool!

*falls off her chair laughing at Raz & Lupa as hippies*

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(Guardian & Freja have just gone through the warpgate to Nexus, Don has run off again)

GoT: Honestly, someone need to put a beeper on that child!

Freja: Or a leash. Getit? Leash, Wolf, Dog?

GoT: 0_o

Freja -_- Nevermind

(Suddenly the warp gate comes to life and Don comes flying out, right at Guardian. He grabs her round the waist and starts to cry into her coat.)

GoT: Donny? Whats wrong?

Donovan: When we were at the warp gate i just turned around for a minute and then you were gone and then Kain can and then he picked me up and then he shook me and then said if i didn't tell him where dad was he'd kill me and i was really scared and then i had to tell him and now he's gone to find him and he's gonna kill dad!. . .Again! (Begins to sob into Guardians coat again)

GoT: We gotta find Raz!

Freja: Uh-huh

(Both stride throught the Nexus gate with Donovan and disapear from view)

*~*~*~*~*~*

Hehehehehehe. Me, Freja & Donny are here for use if you want us.

Good story, you'd better continue or i. . .won't do anything.

Ummmmmmm

Errrrr

I think i'll go now. Good story!

*chuckles* Great chapter. I really like Lupa's wolf form and meeting Kain in the mall was just classic. ^^ Write more soon.

^_^ Kain in the Nexus. :-p
Oh no! Not you too!? *wimpers* The cliffhanger bug strikes again!

*hugs* Good chapter!