I just can't believe it...and it's...just...Geez! That was just plain wrong! Write more soon and fix it!

I hope I am correct in my suspicions that Jordy is not really dead. He is one of my favorite characters. Keep up the good work. I have enjoyed this series immensely.

Oh my, what a powerful series. Life really does suck sometimes, doesn't it? I'm eager to see what happens next. But I'm also afraid.

Okay this may be my first time reviewing but i have read all the mara stories- and you killed Jordy- and that got me to review- more soon please. Lets let Mara be happy for atleat once!

NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO! YOU CAN'T KILL JORDY! YOU CAAANNN'T! I could live with Bruce getting killed. But... NOOOOO! BRING HIM BACK! Minty was the best character made by a fan, EVER. You... you can't - you just CAN'T kill him! I know, I know, you apologized, but... HE'S DEAD! AND YOU KILLED HIM! *sob*

NOOOOOO ! I can't believe you killed Jordy. Poor Mara, he was almost literaly her sanity. At least she hasn't lost the baby. I feel sorry for Jimmy too, he must be feeling pretty guilty right now. I can't wait for the next instalment of this fic.

Congratulations on the most pointless death since Marvel killed off the Spiderman clone.

JORDY! sniffle, sob Wow, things're really heating up. Love it!