good story please update soon pretty please.

hey guys, I'm sorry that the second chapter hasn't been put up yet but I'm working on it. I'm a perfectionist and I haven't had a lot of time on my hands to sit and write it. but I'm trying to hurry and get it on here.

I'm intrigued and can't wait to find out what happens next! I was so surpised when I found out Colby was visiting Vanessa even more so when she showed up in her room.

Quick Question...Vanessa is the bad personality right? Nessa is good? Or do I have them backwards?

This is soooo cool.

I like the story very much :-) I love watching "All My Children"

I look forward to reading more of this story in the future... It's cliff-hanging makes it even more interesting :-)

Stephanie