Man, I wish you'd continue this story. I've been looking foreward to a new chapter for a long time. It's one of the best in the genre.

I hope you continue this story; it's an interesting mixture of all my favorite fanfiction plot elements. Even the characters I don't recognize, rather than annoy me, cause me to want to look up their games. I really do hope you plan to continue this eventually.
All right. Now that I've finished being mature about this, I'm going to sit in a corner and babble about how cool this story is. If you'll excuse me...

Really good story. Really don't see why its rated R though...

Great story! Quite interesting... I have one gripe about your notes, though: "Crappy Japanglish" is not the right term. The word you're thinking of is "Engrish"! Use it with pride!

Just what the world needs: Another Mary-Sue self insert/video game crossover. All you need to do now to fulfill the entire tradition is to

-introduce tons of extraneous characters
-lose focus on the original plot
-add tons of sidestories that go nowhere
-write 10 aimless pages
-give up and leave it unfinished

Think of it as a learning opportunity. At least your spelling and grammar are good. Good luck with your next story.

..Well never have i read a story this creative.I like your story alot and how you used two Akane's.Will Cerl go back to his old self or will he be like that forever?Will ranma still be in love with cerl?Please update this awesome story sooon!!

well i wasnt too sure at first when i started reading the story whether or not i would like it. the character portrayals were rather interesting needless to say. however i really like what you have done with cerl. and i really like what you have done with the crossover characters. very nice. but the cincher realy for me was that you allow characters to redeem themselves. very impressive. i look forward to more humor, and butt kicking in the next chapter. thanks again for sharing.

This is GREAT!

People reading: You can get better formatting (at least for chapters 1-3) if you go to A-kun's homepage. Look up his author info (and read the secret gibberish words that he dared us to read!)

Personally, I'm fine either way on pro-Akane / anti-Akane, so long as it's entertaining. And this story is entertaining in SPADES. First, there are the characters, who are interesting, funny, dramatic, and fascinating. Is it comedy? Is it drama? It is both. Honestly, though, it doesn't seem to quite achieve the realism and total suck-you-in-reality that some stories get. I think that's partially from the comedy, and partially from the slight eye-popping oddness of adding someone like cartoon-Sabrina to the cast. Don't get me wrong, I don't want you to change a thing. But, balanced as it is between comedy and drama (hmm, like the original Ranma?) it is fun, but some of that same fun will prevent it from becoming fully real.

About pro-Akane / anti-Akane: I've seen the whole gamut, and been entertained across the spectrum (by the rare, really good stories). This is the FIRST TIME I have seen a story begin as anti-Akane, go deep into that vein (particularly in chapters 5 & 6), and then allow for some character development. I hope that this becomes a turning point for Akane, and she can break away from her past. (But, of course, my main interest and sympathies now lie firmly with Cerl, of course.) Hey, what is the name "Cerl" from?

Anyway, great, great work! Now I've got to go read the rest of your stuff...

I have not started to read this, and there is one reason. The formating of the text. Try double line breaks between the paragraphs. =)

I hoped that sounded constructive and not mean. I'm only trying to help.

I'm hoping to start reading it tonight.

I like you story.

I think that Akane isnt as bad as antiAkane people think but i know that she has a bad temper and a few more flaws. I LIKE fanfics where Akane grow up. Dont matter as hard it is. I like when anybody change in a better person.

I will like to know what happen now. And I have a lot of hope in the grow up Akane.

Continue please.

Kinai.

Very good idea, besides that fact that it's very... *ahem* twisted sense of romantic views. But all in all, good.

I love stories where the concept is original. And this, my friend, is by far one of the most creative pieces I've read. I absolutely love it. The new Akane is so... well.. so cool.
It's sad that, even though I'm an avid Akane/Ranma fan, I've been getting a little tired of all the same ol' boring stories out there. However, your story has sparked my interest in fan fiction once again.

By the by, you have an amazing gift for comedy. It flares at just the right moment. I really admire authors who incorprate humor into the dialouge. After all, the manga itself is hillarious, so what good is a Ranma story without a few jokes, right? Good job! Really. I'm not just saying this. I've read a billions of stories, but I only review on the ones I really like. And you know what? My review list is so small that I could count those stories with one hand. Now, however, I'll have to count with both hands, because your story has just made my list.

Please, keep writing, I'm very much anticipating the next chapter.

Need More Akane/Ranma Action! Go you! Go you!

hmmm i like the concept so far. the story has some interesting twists with the roles you have chosen for characters. that is very cool. i look forward to reading the next chapter. thanks for sharing.

*eyes widen as she reads the fight scene between Ranma and Ryouga, and sweatdrops*

This... is different...

This story is good!! I hope you come up with more chapters soon. I want to see what else has been changed in this universe.