Reviews for What Was Mine Is

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Jen23 2004-12-29 ch 2,	abuseNice job. The first chapter was enjoyable to read and chapter two was very believable of what could have gone on in Rain's mind while she was in the Dark Gundam.
HeavensRain 2004-03-16 ch 1,	abuseI really like when you have Domon say to George if he wants him to make him kill him, and the stuff before that of coarse evil grin I like the swares & violence CAN'T forget the VIOLENCE!
Jess Angel 2003-11-08 ch 2,	abuseWell done. Powerful and rather creepy as well as sad...The whole Devil/Dark Gundam playing mind games with Rain shivers Yike. I enjoyed this sequel as well. I really don't have any constructive criticism at this time ^__^ I like how things seemed kind of fragmented, made me feel like we were as disconcerted as Rain probably felt while being 'consumed' by the nasty evil Gundam. Write on! Jess 0:o)
Jess Angel 2003-11-08 ch 1,	abuseAmazing...I must say there is something intriguing and delightful in the George/Rain pairing...You really got me feeling for poor George. You depicted both men's emotions wonderfully. Nicely done. And now I'm off to read the sequel skips off to Act Two Jess 0:o)
shinigami 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusei loike this story cuz i don't like rain, she split up allenby and domon, chibbitie could always use another girl in his harem. i think that it could have worked between domon and allenby they're soul mates.
shinigami 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusei loike this story cuz i don't like rain, she split up allenby and domon, chibbitie could always use another girl in his harem. i think that it could have worked between domon and allenby they're soul mates.
shinigami 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusei loike this story cuz i don't like rain, she split up allenby and domon, chibbitie could always use another girl in his harem. i think that it could have worked between domon and allenby they're soul mates.
shinigami 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusei loike this story cuz i don't like rain, she split up allenby and domon, chibbitie could always use another girl in his harem. i think that it could have worked between domon and allenby they're soul mates.
shinigami 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusei hate rain i hate rain for taking domon away from allenby ! if it weren't for rain allenby's last name would be kassu! rain and domon, it will never work . allenby forever !
shinigami 2003-09-01 ch 2, anon.	abusei hate rain i hate rain for taking domon away from allenby ! if it weren't for rain allenby's last name would be kassu! rain and domon, it will never work . allenby forever !
Killer 2003-06-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseOh man... you jackass(crys a bit)...keep writing.
Darkened Soul1 2003-05-22 ch 2,	abuseNO! They've gotta get back together! This is a great fic, PLEASE continue VERY soon!
Venus 2003-05-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is so good! It is very well-written, and it is so sad! I love it! Please update soon!
Kayura1 2003-05-12 ch 2, anon.	abuseHi! I really like what you've done to the episodes. You're putting a lot more feeling and many more emotions than one can show on the tube. That's one of the huge benefits to writing! If you want constructive criticism, I'm not that good at it. Um, you followed the storyline awesomely. You had beautiful spelling and grammar - one of the few fics I've seen worthy of that praise! Yay! The emotions you conveyed were astounding. The part with Domon finding out about George lacked a little something. . . I don't know, but I'm not sure if you projected the anger correctly. I think he also would've felt frustrated by the sudden turn of events, and some helplessness - more than you conveyed would have been eating him. Don't you think that the pain would make it impossible for him to breathe? That Rain's face flashing through his mind would've sent chills of aching need through him? I dunno. I just think it would be cool to have a guy totally into me like that. But I reaaly loved how you worked it. . . especially with Rain. She was done perfectly! I hope you can find another place to squeeze something in. I'll see you later, I hope! Sayonara!
Aolani 2003-05-09 ch 2,	abuseThis is a great chapter! and I love the story! I thInk that you should update very very sooN! keep up your great writing!

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