wow... That was really well written... It was an excellent story, and very twisted at the end. I loved how you used the lyrics, and excelent work at keeping the girls identity secret.

heartwrenching, poignant, beautifully descriptive...

*NA voice* "The girl has talent..."

Excellent.

OMG... Storm, you leave me breathless. I have no words to describe this fic... it was amazing, incredibly, moving... (okay, maybe I do have a few words...)

You must write more Snape! *huggles evil Snape* He's so dark and brooding and... and... *shivers and melts into a puddle of drool*

That was amaaaaaaaaazing, Storm! Very beautifully written, I really really enjoyed it.

You must write more Snape! *nods* Or I'll... die.. and we don't want that, now do we?

*bwahahahaha*

*Twixxa

Wow... you're really good! You can totally feel what she feels. And poor Snape! That one second! Keep up the awesome work you're doing!

Wow... you're really good! You can totally feel what she feels. And poor Snape! That one second! Keep up the awesome work you're doing!

This was good, i liked the ending, a nice little twist. You think that he wont kill her for a moment and then he does.