This is cool! Are you going to do more or what?

*takes deep breath* that was really really really reallyreallyrealy really really really really reallyreallyreallyreally good. *gasps for breath*

Nice job Shinji. I liked this series and I'm guessing I'm right in thinking that you are going to have the new Zero 2 kids join your branch of the school. And was that a hint at a Matt and Tai romance: “Tai, it’s great that your plan worked.” Matt said, patting his friend on the shoulder. Tai laughed, blushing slightly."?

List of things.

_(1)_ Ii is not a good idea to use SI. It confuses people [includidng me]

_(2)_ It is not a good idea to use an SI character from previous stories. It confuses people. Backgrounds are beautiful in some cases.

_(3)_ It is not, I repeat, *NOT* a good idea to kill all of the characters

_(4)_ It is not a good idea to leave an SI character alive. It annoys me.

_(5)_ It is not a good idea to favor an original or SI character. "Everything bad always happens to me." That's bad. People don't know your character. They know the characters from the show. They want more to happen to their favorite characters from the show, not your new character.

_(6)_ It is not a good idea to add all this new backround stuff for a character from another story in the middle of a fic. "But mother's dead. Piedmon killed her years ago." Don't spread out your original or SI character's backround between fics.

_(7)_ It is a good idea, when doing a crossover, to use the characters from the show/movie/book ect. when defeating the bad guy.

_(8)_ It is not a good idea to change a bad guy's form into to something new and then not give him a name. It's very confusing.

_(9)_ It is not a good idea to give all of the 'cool' powers to your original/SI character.

There, eight, that's a nice even number. I've seen this kind of thing happen before. An author has a good idea, but can not write it down very well. It happens to the best of us, myself included. Don't get me wrong, it was a good story, it just gets a little [very] confusing at times. And I know it's first instinct to have all of the good and bad things happen to your character, but that's not what people like to read. They like reading about their favorite characters from the show [whoa, repeting myself. I hate that]. This is why I, along with many others, avoid adding original characters, and when I do, I keep them as secondary characters so as not to taint the main idea of the fic. I'm boreing you now aren't I. This is the longest review I have ever written, but I think this story deserved it. Sorry if I offended you.

Finsh! Finish! Finish! Man! The suspense is KILLING ME!

SAY wHAT?

Mimi mIMI mimI MI MI MIMI MIMI MIMI MIMI MIMI MIMI !

More. Must have more... You write well. Very well. This needs a sequel.

Archangel

Erm... What incest? Kusanagi was just acting weird. He IS a psychopath ya know. And for crying out Pete, I will make Mimi do something a little bit more IMPORTANT in the final battle! Izzy as well! EVERYONE HAS TO HELP OUT IN THE FINAL BATTLE DURN IT! And Myotismon and I did NOT 'get it on' as you bakas say! I'm still only thirteen here in the Real World.

cool story

Well, these fics so far have been pretty good. Though taht other guy who reviewed first was a bit of a wanker. I would really like to see how this turns out though! Write! Write! Write! _

I read parts 2-4 before I decided to review and here is what I thought... WHAT THE HELL! Mimi ,my role model, is not a TWIT as you portrayed her! And Izzy my sis's lil Kawaii genius and Mimi do KNOW ENGLISH.. Izzy's smart so he should know it *DUH* And this fic turned U-G-L-Y when you and Myotismon .. errr got it on? Then it got dumber when that *scrolls up* Kusanagi dud came in.. your brother? Get your marshmellows ready cause your getting FLAMED! This isn't worthy of being a Digimon/X-Men crossover! BAD AUTHOR! It was basically a twisted love story between you Myotismon, and your brother OOPS INCEST! INCEST! INCEST! *charbonne slaps Bella* Charbonne: WHERE"S MY IZZY! You better hope Aquaris never reads this or you might get out of town! THIS SUXS! Belladova/charbonne

.,... oy... Umm,... continue cuz It sounds interestin' and I wanna know what happens... (I'm a Yama-fan...)

OOOOooooKay, that was wierd. I never knew anyone would take my idea and use it in their own fic... but I really don't care. But you better do a good job! *someone shoves charbonne away from the keyboard* Belladova: YOU BEST PUT MIMI IN! *charbonne is trying to get to her feet* Belladova: And My Sexy Yama-Chan BEST have a good power ...and PLEEZE make it a Mimato... GRIN. Belladova: How could you steal me Big sis's idea... *charbonne shoves Belladova away from the keyboard* Charbonne: Geez Bella, you'd think we care what other people write! Oh, well, anyways, that's okay, but I'd be happy if Izzy (my lil' hubby) had Cyke's power... but it's your fic so writa all you want. And guess how many times I had to backspace in this? THOUSANDS! Geez, what's the matter with my typing skills lately? Oh, well, GOOD FIC!