   WatsonandMary4ever 4/4/12 . chapter 1A great poem fic. Very well written. |
| bobalina 3/10/06 . chapter 1 Lovely. 'Specially liked that last part. Anyhoo. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina |
| JazzMind 4/16/03 . chapter 1 I think you should combine the third and fourth lines, and the fifth and sixth; and the second-to-last is my favorite. |
| Springflash 12/26/02 . chapter 1 Nice! I like it. Will you write more? Please?
Springflash Silvermoon |
| Katy 11/8/02 . chapter 1 why do I think you'd be a mary-sue author? |
| Kila Queen of the Smurfs 10/22/02 . chapter 1 beautiful |
| Lilac Rose1 8/18/02 . chapter 1 i dont care, no matter what anyone says this is GOOD! |
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