Hi Just read your story it was good.

Excellent .

That was good. Thanks for the refresher on the shows, I haven't seen Invisible man in a long time. I miss it, also I was wondering which doctor that was? I've only seen the new ones that came out recently. (9th and 10th doctors.) Good Story.

Love Mokona

I liked it. Nice job. :]

I'm glad I wasn't the only one entertained! And sugar isn't a bad thing...really! : )

Yay! It's not short no more! hehe That was a good story. It was different, but thats most likely why i enjoyed it. At the begining you said you were probably the only one that would be entertained, well you got company. Like it or not! _ cool story. Whew, i've really got to stop reading these things after eating so much sugar! _

This story was great! The storyline was really good, and although I have never actually seen an episode of Dr. Who, it seemed like you kept everyone in character. I hope you write some more in the future!