Beautiful play of words. Very interesting descriptions. Awkward ideas with deep routed thoughts. You felt out a part of Ken's character that caught you and that made it terribly soul-filled and believable to its extents.

You should have more of a warning cuz some sentences did shock me o_0;; And put translations - my dictionary doesn't pick up some words ; I've decide to go over this fic rather slowly because of it's effective writing, but I'm only half through it and so tired so I'm reveiwing now in hopes that I'll remember to come back to read/review the other half later.

gotta love the dark stuff ;)

Great fic! A bit dark at first but the gist is what you'd expect from the pairing

That was adorable! I loved it! _ Unfortunately that's all I can think to say... so... I'll just leave you alone now.

Oww that was interesting...I love the way you make Ken descibe things...it's so meaningful ;)

Oh, Vain. This is truly nummy, with the imagry and the creep-factor and the humanity/imperfection/reality of the characters. Yay! ::gnaws on the fic with pleasure::

okay...that was kinda creepy...and disturbing...but i like it! i think it's great, it's really well written and can't you just imagine ken having problems like that? well anyway, great story.

duckie

Deep! Very, very deep!

Wow, I liked it though and I can see Ken acting like that, though I can see Ken doing a lot of things, so that's no surprise!

I hate my twisted mind sometimes, simply because it's not twisted enough! You see you wrote that and it's the sort of thing I would have written if given the idea! Damn!

Dude, you are so fucking messed. Beyond messed, even...

In any case, this I like. Creepy-Angsty-Ken is always fun to play with, and all the stuff about death and blood and corpses and... fun. You're as sick and twisted as I am.

wow...when I get writer's block, things like Miyako's Way comes out. This story...I didn't understand half of it, and I didn't know the meaning of all the words, and half the time I didn't know what Ken was talking about, and yet... I could get this perfect image of the imperfection that is Daiken. You truly are an amazing person, Vain.

Excellent! It was so morbid and disturbing. Just the way I like it! There should be a sequel to this...

*whispers* sugoi... I admire your writing. It seems so effortless, does it take you long to write your phrases? I'm jealous. _ I hope you cured your writer's block.

Hurm. I have to agree with Daisuke on this one and say that Ken is acting decidedly creepy, and all visualization of him as a bloated corpse aside, I think I've fallen in love with 3 am angsty Ken.

As opposed to all other angsty Kens?

Took me a moment to figure out where you were headed with the Japanese part. All the suki dai and whatnot, since I'm more used to suki da. Ken might have an accent? :D But you did well. I'm going to go read the other updates now. WOoosh!

I really, really love this. It's simple but you can't go wrong with a good sleepover fic, and it's twisted but that just makes it even better. You have a good sense of the mental pathology of Ken, and you write him well. Good job!

Nice! It sounds so plausible and realistic.