sorry i did not review sooner... awesome story great story line please write more!

Hey this really was a great beginning to a great story...I really liked the fact that you used real locations, like LaGuardia. You are also good with the lingo and languages. Bravo!

You story was sooo good.

This story is off the hook! I loved everything about it from start to finish. The only thing I recommend is extending the love scenes in more details. I won't sleep until you update!