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| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseAw! Why couldn't it have happened the way you saw it? I like your version better. I feel bad cuz I kind of gave up on Charmed after everything with Cole went down. I loved his character, and for the writers to have done that to him, I was so angry. lol Another fantastic one-shot! ~Chica~ |
| Christine Ruud 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseSweet. |
| wiccanforever 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseCute! |
| Gwenefhar333 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat idea!! I'm glad I'm not the only one constantly finding ways to deny what the writers did to Cole! |
| Badgirl21 2004-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI liked that Phoebe and Cole got all their problems out with each other and with themselves. Really like the ending. |
| Lilian 2002-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseNow this, *this* is the perfect season opener. Phoebe pushing things under the carpet and trying to move on without really wanting to, and Cole working *hard* (and non-demoniclly) to get her back. Charmed is, above all, about the people, and there were people the ones who talked in this story, not witches, not demons, not whitelighters--- people. Thank you, Shel, for yet another wonderfuly written piece. Now if I could just get you to write for Speliing & Co... :0 |
| Barb6 2002-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful - a perfect beginning filled with hope. Excellent idea to trap Phoebe in an elevator where she can't run from the truth. The dialogue is excellent and the feelings perfect. This would make the perfect beginning to Season 5. |
| maggie 2002-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe hope of a new beginning. Letting go of the past. I loved it... All the things you hope will happen in season 5 but know won't. That would be too easy. Please continue. I'd love to read more. |
| Amber 2002-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, damn! This is awesome. I look forward to a sequel. |
| gemini UK 2002-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh that was wonderful shel, you caught Phoebes fears so well, especially her concern about herself and what/who she sees as she looks at Cole. Am I correct in thinking , hoping, that you might be doing a sequel? |
| e 2002-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story...I wanna know what happens next :) |