No one really knows what happened to Meryl before she died/got rescued at the end. You're writing style is very nice. You also stayed in character too. Please keep writing more. _

really good story...Considering Im in love with that game lol. You did really good on this story

what an excellent fanfic. There are a lot of metal gear stories that an very unbelieveable, but yours is really brilliant. You don't change the characters personalities either which is a rareity. Well done, and please keep writing more! Meryl is my favourite.

I have spent the greater part of the evening going through each page of the MGS section to find a fic which would cater to my tastes, and that is:

1) A well written MGS fic, and,

2) A SnakexMeryl fic

I had just about given up when I chanced upon your vignette. Thank you!

One criticism, however: it's heroine, not heroin. Heroin is the drug. One of those pesky little things that spell checkers cannot catch. Maybe someday we'll have homonym checkers.

omg. that was very good. I loved both versions. Especially Snake's. Write more. What about a POV about Sniper Wolf's Death and Otacon's reaction? Or Emma's death with Otacon's reaction? Or even Queen's reaction to Vamp's death.

I love this story and it saddens me Meryl is on of my favorite characters and everyone seems to forget her. I've always wondered what happened to her I mean most of the game she was caputured so what exactly DID they do to her? I really believe that you keep her in character, in fact keep them all in character, which i have found that most can't do. I applaud you and encourage you to write more. I await your next fanfic.

I just love this fic, your writing style is lovely. I especially liked that bit about Liquid's 'primal gaze'. Great stuff! _

It's so nice! *runs to get a hanky*

This story is really good. Hope you update real soon.

Whoa... That is very, very, very writing stories like is very good.

That was beautiful

*smiles*wonderful! Absolutly fantastic! You described Meryl so well...amazing fic!_

very nice story

Well done. Characterization is right on cue, and the in depth look of Meryl feelings was nice. Good flow, style of writing and I liked the Liquid interaction I wanna see more of that. Look forward to another part. BTW, Meryl's the best - I'm glad you did it from her pov.

Nice story. Very nice. However, there were some inconsistancies. Meryl was shot not in the snowfield, but rather on the bottom walkway to the Communications Tower. And the one who told her about Snake was Colonial Campbell, whom she believed was her uncle at the time. Other than that, it was an amazing story, and I can't wait to see your MGS2 stuff.