PLEEEEEAAAAASSSEEEE WRITE THE SEQUIL. ya kno? The one during those 5 years? Best. Fanfiction. Ever.

This story is legendary.

You should be so proud of urself that was a AWESOME story one of the best fanfics. Great job!

Holy crap! This was your first story! Its so good!

Great story but predictable. I mean anyone with a brain knew that was ash.

I L-O-V-E-D IT! I cried like all the way through. You did make some mistakes however. Ash's mum's name is Deli and Picachu is a boy. But other from that really, I loved it!

What a great story! My friend recommended me, and I'm glad I looked this story up. It was awesome!

Killer of thy Cookies, Kook

YOU BETTER FIX THAT! I AM CRYING!

It was hard to imagine Ash giving up and going to that school in the first place - he's not really dependent on them, he's been on his own for two years, and if they tried to force him, he has pokemon on him.

The rest was very sad and very excellent.

Ok,besides me hating Ash's father with a bloody passion even more so than the manipulators of harry potter, Lelouchs father in code geass,or the frikin civilian council in Naruto...I just love this story!

This is bloody good u should do another one I've read this 10 times over and I can still read it wiv exitment

Wow just wow

This one is the most fabulous fanfiction of all. I really wish this were the last episode of pokemon anime. Thanks for such a great epic.

Looking forward for further of your writings regarding this episode

Wow. This is Amazing. Detailed and long but not so long it gets boring. I kinda knew straight from the start it was Ash but there was the hint of doubt the whole was through especially when you hit the scene with Mrs Ketchum and Ash/Shan.

I understand by what she means as Ash is Dead. Jeez people! Its not that hard!

It was a great interesting story! Love it! Well done!

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