Your story is so sad and sweet. Chekov is one of my favorite characters and this was well written.

Wow. That was amazing.

I LOVE that song too. It's one of my favorite's.

My sister wrote a songfic with the Savage Garden song, "You Can Still Be Free". It's not Star Trek, it's in the Gundam Wing/Sailor Moon crossover section, but she doesn't use and descriptions or names in it so that the reader can use their own imagination for who the characters are.

If you're interested in reading it, here's the link:

This story was really great and it's going in my favorites. ^_^

this story made me cry. I like how you made his character. He seems very nervous, and it sort of adds to his tendency to be injury- prone, but it is beautifully written. Keep Writin'!

That was dark and very beautiful. Chekov is a largely unknown character, and it is nice to read something so delicate about his past. Very well written.

Oh, deep. I REALLY like it. Chekov is so cool. So is this. But seriously, I really like it. Touching. Yeah.

That was really sad! Chekov is my favorite character, and I always wondered why they tortured him so much. Anyway, youre an excellent author.

yeah! this is so good... no, it's bad, well... for Pavie it's bad but for s it's good! yeah! do more!

This was a really good story. It was well written and showed a side of Chekov that hasn't really been investigated before.

~The Hog

First off, I'd like to say that I'm practically in love w/ Chekov, so this thing had me in tears! Literally! YOU'RE A REALLY GOOD AUTHOR!

This was sooo sad...poor Pavel...

I loved it, though. Chekov's my fave. Very well written.