It's never a truly boring day at the Masaki household, LOL, looking forward to the next chapter

Great story. You certainly have done a great job capturing the feel of Tenchi in Tokyo.

I could actually see this as an episode. You're so good at it! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Wow, I'm loving this, so far. Hopefully, it turns out to be as good as your previous work. :)

This is a very good story so far. Continue to upload. I always felt that Sakuya was the right girl so far. She seemed as modest as she was attractive. She didn't fight over Tenchi like Ryoko and Ayeka do. The fact that Sakuya was Yugi's shadow means that she would be just like Sakuya when she grew up.

Hey are you going to continue this, it was getting good! It's almost been about two years since you updated this.

very good story
hope to see more chapters soon

This story is turning out pretty well. Can't think of any other comments besides that. Great job!

Write more soon. Excellent and original story. Might I add that I hope Yugi becomes more like Sakuya?

Well, I suppose I should read the prequel first, but I'll just go ahead and say this. I REALLY hope that you don't turn Yugi into just a blonde Sakuya. Yugi was the only decent character in Shin Tenchi, and Sakuya was the most boring character in it, so it would be a great loss if Yugi ends up being Sakuya, and nothing more. Remember, Sakuya was just a part of Yugi, not the entirety of her.

hahahahahh this is so rich Yugi is back and better looking then ayeka or ryoko an tenchi liked yugi better anyway WW3 anyone...

It's a good start. At this point I can't say anymore than that.

Its pretty good. So far at least. I cant say i'm a direct fan of Tenchi and Sakuya if it turns out that way. Because I know that hes going to choose Ryoko in the 3rd oav, but still its pretty good. I almost never see any fics written about Yugi and she is such a rounded character. Its nice to see her get some respect. And its interesting to imaging what she would be like if she ever did wake up from her stasis.

Keep it up, i want another chapter

*****Murasaki Ayumi-can*******

I think Ryoko nailed it on the head when she said Yugi would become Sakuya. Sakuya was Yugi's shadow.

A good continuation and better written that the seriesit was based on. More belivable ans so it has a good feeling that I hope will continue!

dennisud