so what else does this reitman guy know? hmmmm. i wonder how the main mons will make it back to earth... hmmmmmmmmnnnn... . (ps: i like)

hmmmmm, now this proves for some interesting things. does that mean the kids are like the bakemon, in that they can't come in contact with organic matter? if so, what happens when one gets hurt? ::mocks chris:: hmmnnnn. .

Awesome story line PLUS Mimi & Joe? I'm in heaven! I love this! Please say the next part will be out soon...? Not to rush you or anything... _ And just a stupid little note, but that description of Tai's hair being a "gargantuan mop" was just perfect. LOL

OUTSTANDING! Totally kickass! Can't wait for more! Angel_Charity

Good story! Although I'm not much for Mimou... Next part please. Keep up the good work!

Write! More!Now! Please?

Tht was so super good! i can't wait for the rest! Yea! Taiora too! Ohh, I gotta calm down...I'm so excited. hurry up with the rest! I can't wait!

*swears under breath* My GOD, what's happening next...write more! More! MORE! *cute grin* Onnegai? Angel_Charity

Intriguing...I'm going to find the next part! Angel_Charity

ha! Anyway very kawaii

iiiiinteresting. intrigued. already know but want to know more. (see, keeping readers in the dark is a good thing . you ought to try it .) ::hugglz:: keep on writin!

Ooh, I can't wait for part one. Well, I can, but really don't want to.