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Viki
2003-01-04
ch 2, anon.
abuseLoved the story...I don't know, this fic has a whole different twist from all the others I've read- partly what makes it so interesting. Really it's much better than all the fics where Kuririn finds Juu somewhere, and takes her home...get real..honesty, Juuhachigou would stay???? Not to mention it tampers with not only Juu's, but Kuririn's personality. Until this one, I've oinly found one K/18 get together that I like, and that was "In My Dreams"- I think.
Loved your ideas- very original
KEEP WRITING AND UPDATING ON YOUR TIME- PLZ????????????????? Ok, sorry, - but plz update......
makes-food-taste-ketchuppy
2002-11-22
ch 2,
abusecontinue continue fa le la la la la!
sorry i ate too much cake. Keep writing or I may get mad...
May the Namek be with you!
Chrystal
2002-11-11
ch 2,
abuseThis is a great K/18 fic!Keep it up!
Skittles1
2002-08-25
ch 2,
abuseI love it sooo much!! Please please write more ASAP!!! *huggles* Keep up the excillent work!!! Two thumbs and toes WAY WAYYYY up!!!
Halfpenny
2002-08-21
ch 2,
abuseWhy'd you have to go and leave us hanging like that? ~_~ Very nice story, clever idea with the Time Chamber! It does suffer a bit for the format, though. If you could fix that, you'd have a truly excellent piece of work on your hands. Keep it up!
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2002-08-21
ch 2, anon.
abuseI like this fic. I think this is the best K/18 fic I've ever read....1. Lol, well try to get the next chapter out soon
Tench-Sama
2002-08-21
ch 2,
abuseI like it. I especially like the fact that Krillin is going to use the room of Spirit and Time. I was always ** that the humans never got to use the room.
Psyfire
2002-08-21
ch 2,
abusethis is the first K/J I've read and boy I really like it... I never thought that deeply about it, but ya she would have a lot of problems in that head of hers.. and its so CUTE to see Kuririn stumble over himself :) I can't wait for you to continue!
The Vixen
2002-08-21
ch 2,
abuseDamn you're good! This was a very very very nice chapter. I like how 18 is so confused all the time... like, how she thinks things out and confuses things even more as her mind aruges with itself. Its really good.
I like the flashbacks of their conversations too. They helped make the characters even more confused, which was awesome for the kind of angst you're creating here! I hope to see the next chappie soon! If you have an e-mail update list, you can put me on it (stinkysocks530@hotmail.com). If not, its ok, I'll just read and review if I see this fic updated. ^_^
The Vixen
2002-08-20
ch 1,
abuseWow that *was* a very long chapter! I really liked it though. I never really see too many K/18 get together fics... I don't know why. I mean, their get-together was as 'mysterious' as the B/V get together.

Anyway, I really liked this chapter! You do a really good job with the detail and the different POVs. I'm gonna go read the next chapter now!
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