I liked this story but can I make a suggestion. Not a bad one I promise. Everytime someone speaks you might start another will keep readers following the story.

"I am ben willis" ben willis said

"I know who you are." Julie replied.

Well anyway great story.

Well that was hard to follow

yeah, it was okay, it wasnt my favorite, al though i cant say anything mine is bad to :( i liked it!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... AND HA!

... *shakes head*

Heyo! Umm... I've never seen these movies but you told me to read your story so I did and... it's great so far. heehee. Good work Midge.. and Erin if she was there. I dunno. Well anyway keep up the work.

omg! Its so funnie already i cant wait till i write more! lolz