really good. Sort of why I thought she left too...

I second every thing JediCallie said! And I'll add Wonderful, Amzing, and Teriffic!

Girl, I have now read all of your SW fanfic on this site and I can't say enough good things about it... FINALLY, someone who understands Callie's personality and can write her with the dignity and respect she deserves! Heck, you've been able to accomplish what none of the writers other than Hambly could do-give Callie depth and make her a sympathetic character. Bravo, bravo!

And thank you especially for portraying Luke and Callista's relationship the way it deserves to be portrayed: as a deep, onece-in-a-lifetime love between two people who had been scarred by the things they'd experienced in life but in each other found hope and light. The time they were together was not long, but in that all-too brief moment they managed to form a bond that will never be broken (even if subsequent authors can't be bothered to acknowledge that ;-)).

Great job! :-)

I applaud this fic... Go Callista Ming!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Finally, a sophisticated piece that has the most realistic handling of the Callista/Luke scenario that I've seen yet. Personally, I cannot abide by either her or Mara being with Luke (couldn't the profic authors have done better?), but you have made me see Callista in a sympathetic light. If you knew how I really felt about her, you'd realize the depth of what you have accomplished. Thank you for another masterful, mature piece!

This is a great story! Thanks for all the review you have given me. They mean alot! Keep writing!

This is very good. One of the rare pieces that doesn't feature Callista just as n evil bimbo, but as a complex character that she is. Mind you, I've read too many of the former and the writers of most Callie-bashing stories seemed like they can't write their own names if their lives depend on it. You might try spacing between paragraphs though, and spacing everytime somebody say someting is pretty customary.

Okay, I should appologize for all of the lack of spacing. I guess I didn't realize my .txt file would be so incompatible. If anyone wants an easier version of the story to read...email me or go to Area51/Meteor/1041

Interesting insights. I liked your story. You might do a little more on the paragraph thing (makes it a bit easier to read! ) ) Can't say I'm sorry she left him, because I love him and Mara together D, but this is a wonderful story.