|Reviews for Cannonaball 4 Test Drive|
| Charles Xavier 8/21/02 . chapter 1
Nice cast list. But just a few pointers:
1. Some of the characters I have no idea where they're from. Maybe you should say where each character comes from. And don't put characters made from fanfics. Because that's just hard to picture.
2. Spelling? No offense, but I suggest maybe you ought to check your work after you've done it.
Well, as long as your story makes sense and doesn't get messed up, you'll be on the right track.