I love it, plz write more

Thats so good! Kinda sad though, the ending that is.

that's all ? that was too short, maybe you can use this to make a bigger story.? the bigger the better

Cute. Nice job

Whoa. Wicked ending. And I guess you got me to review, huh?

i will review...oh. i mean...good job. weird. who's her mother?

Wow, it was awesome :)

Good story. I liked it although I am a bigger fan of Ami/Ani stories. Go on like this.

OOOOoooh! you're just like me! except that I know that its called a 'wrist crono' ant theyre tusken *raiders* not *rangers*. A true freak would know these useless bits of trivia. tisk tisk. I liked it though. (dont tell anyone, but I'm realy the INFAMOUS Kristin from the HP section)

Not bad. Predictable ending, but a nicely original story over all. So does Alcina have a particular meaning or did you create it from scratch. You know if Alcina has a father, she must also have a mother and there was most likely a romance somewhere along the way. Looking to do a "prequel" to your series? You really should consider it. :)

Too cool! I loved the little twist ending. Too bad all the good writers are PSYCHIC and tend to steal my IDEAS before they get onto paper...It's not your fault, I probably picked up my idea psychically from yo uor something. Oh well, I'm a talentless hack, anyway. Thanx for taking an idea I thought I had and making it worth reading!

Great story. btw, you are wanted over at the fan fic forum of the jedi council.

Oh! I know what the GFFA equivilent of a watch is, but I just can't think of it off the top of my head. .