|Reviews for When I Awaken|
| greenfairie 11/19/02 . chapter 1
wow, you captured her thoughts pefectly. I love this. Bravo! *applause is heard*
| Fantine really I have cruel parents 9/7/02 . chapter 1
"and tell Cosette I love her and I'll see her when I wake..."
Lovely. The only mis-fic I've enjoyed. I'm thankful you haven't written another "Éponine gets the guy and is actually a perfect angel" fics. Just lovely.
| Whisper to the Water 8/28/02 . chapter 1
*sniff* get out the tissues...it's an excellent representation of character in first-person.
| Ela 8/25/02 . chapter 1
Ooh, a new recruit! Yay! Me like! I can't 'till you get to Gavroche! (Well, that's me for ya...)
| AmZ 8/23/02 . chapter 1
i really like this. i usually don't go for tears and sentimentality, but this sounded honest enough. good job!
| Manon 8/23/02 . chapter 1
I like it. The opener is especially good - "my bleak world of milky gray and diluted sunlight". Nice.
"Teen" is out of place here; even the word "teenager" is a neologism. Maybe "girl". Also, you could stand to cut down on the ellipses.
Otherwise, it's sweet.