This is really good. This a great idea of Llogan and Heavens life together.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I absoluotley Luv thiz! The Casteel family is my fav. in the V.C. series! Keep on writin'!

Very sad. Don't usually go for songfics, but I really did like this one. Perhaps a full-fledged fic could be made from this concept? There is a big gap between Fallen Hearts and Gates of Paradise.
(you know, I always did like Troy much better.)

I really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful writing.