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Reviews For: Another First Kiss

Rangerbaldwin
2002-09-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhat a beautiful story. Just full of Lee's emotions. I think it was great and possible. Your grammar is some of the best I've seen on the web. I hope you write us a lot more SMK stories. We need them. Ranger B
anonymous7
2002-08-30
ch 1,
abuseThis was really great. You did a fine job of capturing Lee's emotions. And it certainly added a new element to what happened during those episodes. I'm with you - I like to think this happened behind the scenes, too. Thanks for sharing.
ec
2002-08-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think it must be very difficult to write a "first person" story. Nice job!
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