please continue, or feel my wrath of pain, cause i love the pairs

This is an awsome story please continue it! please!

i read this awhile back, and i really like it..please continue with it.

Ah, a great story. Please continue.

I read this a while ago. Will it be continued?

I say serves Ranma right for saying that to poor Ryoga-kun especially that remark about his parents. I hope Ryoga-kuns alright please update soon.

Umm...I read this chapter a while ago pn your site so nothin really new about it. Somehow, I don't really thing Ranma would be that mean. Well it's doing pretty well and I hope you continue this soon, as well as updating your site.

It's really unfortunate that this story seems to be abandoned! I really want to know what happens next... you've got a great plotline forming here!

it would be soo awesome if you would or could finish that story. Let no string be untied, ya know? _

Wow, this sounds so cool. I can't wait for more!

ah! i want to see the big explosion _

keep on going your doing good!

Damn that's really good. To bad about Ryoga's parents though.

Very nice... the opening poem was rather Tolkein-ish, always a good thing for a fantasy story. I also like the fact that Ranma is not the core of the story, something rather rare in current fics.

On the other hand, there are some spots that need attention. your dialogue seems a bit too terse, description is slightly lacking, and your paragraghs (and postings, for that matter) seem a bit to short.

I definately encourage you to keep at this fic!

OMG! I love this kind of storys, you know whith dragons, trolls, mistical forces and stuff. Girl keep it up!

Ok, you got me hooked. I'm looking foward to more chapters. This fic shows real promise.