 FallenTruth 10/27/05 . chapter 2I like this idea it was nice to read! Well written and I especially love the last line! |
 StarComets04 9/21/05 . chapter 2Love your style. please continue the story. It's cute. I admire Goku's attitude too. Funny you mentioned Toufa in the story. |
 hiroko-chan 10/6/02 . chapter 2 YOZ ! well hmm nice maye can write fic goku ganna blackmail use the gal or something.. u knoe hahah THE RETURN |
 meiruorin 8/27/02 . chapter 2 What is so sad in this story... did someone died there. All I hear is the stupid monkey left the village and waiku hopes for his arrival |