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Cassandra30
2009-11-22 . chapter 1
Excellent!
Yogi
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
You were absolutely spot-on about Ron's characterisation. Like this (/community/the_hms_stfu/412205.html#cutid1) brilliantly amazing article says, Ron doesn't have jealousy issues. He has an inferiority complex. Very few people get that, and you captured it perfectly. I love your work. Have you ever considered writing for a living? Ten thumbs up. :D
Anna Nigma
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
This story is too cute! Ron and Harry friendship stories are always fun and all too often in fanfiction Ron is portrayed as a jealous, intolerant, selfish prat and many of the people draw on the fight in GoF as an example to back up their theory so seeing from Ron's point of view was nice. He's one of my favorite characters in the books and a lot of writers give him the short end of the stick. Great story, made my day.
RWFDHF
2006-11-17 . chapter 1
yes i agree i dont think it was jelousy hermione doesnt know everything.lol. That was a reall good fic. I also just read your fic with polyjuice and drac shagging ron as harry...anyway i liked that one too. U should do a sequel even though its been a while. And please make ron get with draco cause i just love the pairing even though my 2nd is harry and ron but no no no harry and draco never liked them for some reason. Oh well enough of my babbling great fics!
lil'hp fan124
2005-07-18 . chapter 1
(Snifs) That was SO well written, I almost started crying. Anyhoo, great fic, loved how you described Ron's pov of the fight and his emotions and everything. I really liked the part where Ron's saying that he needs Harry and that Harry needs him, it was so cute!
Emuerz
2005-03-20 . chapter 1
I have tears in my eyes. That was amazing. The emotion in that was powerful, powerful! I felt it in me as well. Thanks for writing that, it was amazing.
Shading in Grey
2005-02-09 . chapter 1
Wow, poor Ron. Great story!
Bunni-Chan
2004-08-29 . chapter 1
Brillient. I don't normally read "general" fics like this(bah, you know what I mean). It just being Ron and all. But you gave this little fued such depth. I had never really thought much about it. Just, oh he's jealous, stop being a prat, blah blah, but you actually put somthing in there and made it have such a different dimension. You have a real knack for writing Ron POV(which is fabulous because Ron is my first HP love). I think you have it all just right, which is tricky, and I commend you. *bow*
sabrina
2004-06-22 . chapter 1
nice one!
Fair-Ithil
2004-06-02 . chapter 1
I love your theory, never forget you theory, and I don't care if JKR ever says anything against your theory in canon, I will go by it...Wow is all I can really say. Now excuse me while I go cry some more.
hymnia
2003-11-24 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Nicely written, and I think you really captured Ron's character well.
snowflake
2003-09-10 . chapter 1
This is such a beautiful peice of work. I agree, there was something else besides jealousy that made Ron fight with Harry. I thought that you explained everything perfectly, and it was extremely IC.
Simply Amazing.
sarah
2003-07-20 . chapter 1
awesome fic!
Liebling
2003-05-03 . chapter 1
Incredibly well done!

"I fought with you. But. . .you . . .you didn't fight by the rules."

You got in Ron's mind so well! Loved it.
Kiara7
2003-03-18 . chapter 1
I cannot explain to you just how much I adore this story. In fact, I've spent most of the morning reading your stories and I've loved every single one so far, though I don't write reviews a lot so I haven't commented on every single one.

I adore how well you got into Ron's head. It's perfect. I, also, think that Ron felt cheated and betrayed, which is what made him fight with Harry. He's been jealous before, and I do think it's a big driving force to him, but I also think that Ron would have never gone so crazy about things if it weren't for the fact he felt that Harry had abandoned him. Like Ron felt that Ron didn't mean to Harry what Harry meant to Ron. A little confusing, but I've always thought this way, and I'm glad to see I'm not alone.

I shower you with praise. You deserve it.
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