man you always end a story on a good part the storys are great keep updating please

KEEP ON UPDATING!

where is the rest of the story please?

Is this abandoned? Cause im likin it

A most well writen story. Will there be any up dates to this story or Two halves of a soul

holy crap this is one stupid story. Do you spew this junk out all the time? Maybe it's because you have Piccolo forfeiting a match (where have I seen that idea before? coughbuusagacoughmovie9cough) or maybe its because you're obsessed with frying pans, but this is some pathetic stuff, even more pathetic since it's a romance fic.

great fic but that ugly fat marron can't fight!she's nothing but a stupid noseless baby!No way in HELL could she beat truns and goten!

Awesome. Please update soon.

it's ok

awsome story cant wait for the next chapter! oh and ive been noticing that in most of ur stories gohan and videl get together too fast most of my freinds enjoy when there is gohan torture in the storie or how gohan and videl get together stories

That was so awesome. i wish u would continue, even though it is kind of hopeless after over a year with no updates.

plz review i wanna see what happens...it is a great story btw

I love this story! ^O^ I like how Videl and Gohan always get embarassed when the group keeps talking to them about how much noise they make at night. lol. I feel sorry for them. Please update this story soon! I think it's one of the best I've read! ^ ^ On a scale of 1 to 10 I give this story a 10! ^ ^

MOre PLz i love this story

NO! I want Gohan to win!! I know he wuvz Videl and all, but make Gohan win!! GREAT story^_^ Absolutly perfect!! Please keep going...I wanna know what happens!! I wuv dis story^_^