wow, that's incredible! Very cool! one thing that did bother me though was that you didn't say what his injuries were, or maybe you did and I'm just dumb! lol, either way, you should deffinitly keep this story up, don't like yaoi but you're good!

that was sweet. will there be more or is it a one shot?

you need a sequal...

a very good story, nicely done... you didn't confine Duo to the normal idiotic parameters most people believe this character is... also you show some hidden depth to Heero... I'd like to see that expanded... maybe go more into the reactions of the other pilots

in other words, I liked it.