LOL! I loved how you made it seem like Goku and Goten when it was really Bardock and Goku. Now that I think of it, Goten is even MORE similar to Goku in that aspect. They both never met their dads... Hard to beleive I didnt notice that... Well at least Goten met his dad.

Woah, completely thought this was Goku watching Goten!

I never would have guessed it was Bardock and Goku!

Good Job!

You did a good job tricking me into thinking that it was Goku and Goten at first. I kept believing that until I read the last line. Really, we don't have enough of Bardock and Goku stories out there and you've done a wonderful job writing this.

This is good! I like you're work!;D

Yes, I really thought it would be Goku watching Goten - you did an excellent job there. When I re-read it, it all made sense, it was totally Badrock-Kakarott, but at the same time it could as well be Goku-Goten.

I really loved this one.

aww... and yea, you did good. i totally thought it was goku watching goten. but it could have been bardock. i never really thought of that... until you said it of course. but cute none the less.

very creative

XD I WANT YOUR WRITING TALENTS! lol but more great work XDXDXD

great fic you seem to beable to capture bardock personality fairly well go oyu.

aw.

Very good...you definitely made me think Goku was the narrator. I like stories that catch me off guard. Doesn't happen that often. Great job! -

Very good. I liked it a lot. )

Aw...thats so sad..:( so kawaii...god ur awsome

it's so sad! i cried ;-; ...lol...well written...i really did think it was Goku talking about Goten at first...maybe Goku will meet Bardock someday in the Otherworld...but what about Goku's mom? she's never mentioned anywhere in the series...she might be the female Saiya-jin in the Bardock movie... ::shrugs shoulders:: maybe you could write a lil one-shot about her! ::grins:: cuz God knows how terrible my writing is...hehehe...keep it up! .

AH I TOTALLY THOUGHT IT WAS GOKU AND GOTEN! but... then again, bardock and goku totally look alike too. kool, its like a dynasty! BARDOCK-GOKU-GOTEN. i feel bad for gohan now. maybe he'll be my fave character... *enters gohan in the race for my affection*