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Reviews for: The snake who lived Book 1: Philosopher's stone - Page 1 of 18
lastcrazyhorn
2009-08-24 . chapter 2
Never thought that sunlight could ooze . . .
BlackRoseFire
2009-08-12 . chapter 14
Awesome story. I can't wait to see the next one.
i love U regardless of who U r
2009-07-31 . chapter 14
Loved it
AsianAngel121
2009-07-23 . chapter 14
Great job! One of the best stories ever!:)
AsianAngel121
2009-07-23 . chapter 13
Omg! Your story is AMAZING! I love it so far!
AsianAngel121
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Omg! I love your plot idea and your first xhapter is great! Its a great start!:) I never realized how different things could be if things were only a teeny bit different!:D
Liberty Cassandra Black
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
Blaise was discovered a male in book 6 of Harry Potter. Just go to the chapter where they're on the train.
HolyMoses
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Blaise Zabini is a boy. There's a whole lot of information about him in the books. Like how his mother has been widowed seven times, and he follows the pure blood agenda. In book six he comments about how Ginny is attractive, but he would never touch a "blood traitor"

Still, there were lots of other choices for you. Tracey Davis would be a good choice, as not very much is known about her. Daphne Greengrass; although she is definitely a pure blood as Malfoy marries her younger sister Astoria.

Still, it's a good story you've got here, just takes a bit to get use to your Alternate Universe.
GoodPiperRavenclaw
2009-02-01 . chapter 14
good story, keep up the good work.
Draeconin
2008-12-26 . chapter 2
-Which doesn’t give ONE SINGLE clue about Zabini’s sex. I rest my case.

You rested it too soon. The name itself gave Zabini's gender away, long before JKR revealed it. 'Blaise' is a boy's name. The female version is 'Blaize'.

The pet list? Your beta is wrong. 'Rat' isn't in any English version of the books, and there were other animals taken to Hogwarts that weren't on the list - such as the tarantula owned by Lee Jordan. So while cats, owls and toads might be preferred, they aren't the only animals allowed.
whocares?
2008-12-24 . chapter 3
As for the "Harry Potter" insted of Potter, Harry: in the American version it did say Potter, Harry, but if someone not truly understanding the story but just translating it, it could seem like Harry Potter is a name unable to be changed and used only in that form or abrevated. It happens a lot in translated works when the translater is not into the story or is very tired while needed to make a deadline. As for the mistake getting past the editor, there is a lot that gets past editors with a lot of work on their plate.
Obamarocks2008
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
me likey
emos rock
2008-10-12 . chapter 3
blasie was a boy in the books
Allie-grrl4
2008-08-16 . chapter 4
update soon
Wise Pallas Athena
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
Blaise is not a girl but a boy, I know it's confusing because blaise is a name for boys aswell as girls but I thought I should mention it.
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