"Sebastian. Sebastian Delacour." Sebastian gave a slight bow

De Lacour is Folkens name! ok ill be quiet, sorry, but im kindsa freaky today, freaky freaky freaky, *tut tut* anywhosers, this story is great so far

Hey, it's me again. Nice to see that you have some new chapters and things sound really interesting now. My favorite part so far is Ark and Hadull since hardly anyone writes about the priest wizards in OLS fanfictions and you wrote them true to their characters.

Also on 's board, in the Takehiko Itoh section, I've been translating names in Future-Retro Hero Story so far. So if you want to check that out you can.

I don't think I'm alone when I say I'd like to see more and more planets fall under the ruthless domination of our solar system.

- Jack Handey, "Deep Thoughts"

Great story! I love all the suspense. hope to read more soon

ja ne

I remember reading part of this fic a while ago. I like your story so far;keep up the good work!

You’re a very good writer. I really like the story so far. It was also funny how you put us in the chapter at the top. I never saw all the way through Blade Runner, but the Fanfic does have the atmosphere. Also I finally signed up for , Whee!

Hahahahahahaha!

He fell over the couch! Loser! And oh...the suspense...the lyre...oooohhhh!

hehehe...ok, i'll stop...for now.

neways...that was good. keep it up.

And i believe u r wrong, ppl do sometimes relay on things that most wouldn't think about. So...,

Hurry, hurry, fro-bot, ppl are waiting...

Mo it's from an 8 megabyte computer!

Well, well, well...so you finally decided to write the first chapter to this thing, I'm impressed...really...

It was pretty good, getting to the action and all really quick. But have a question for you...will you put some more blood scenes in any future chapters? Come on...you have to...I'll be good, promise!

Ok, you know wht I'm going to tell you right? I've known you for long enough...so you should know what I'm thinking at while I'm writing this...*projects mental message to your brain*

Anyway, I'll stop now...I'm quite sure that your tired of hearing (or seeing) my inconsistant rantings...so I'll go now and head off to skool...hehehe * i did that on purpose*

See ya,

Peridot Pooka

P.s. keep writing...me need more material to read for educational purposes...

MONIQUE!

Will you please hurry up and write another chapter for this thing already!

Geez...we've all been patient but still no first chapter! Move your butt already!

Just because you've been writing other chapters and have had a writer's block is no excuse...you just can't leave ppl hanging like that...someone just might commit suicide waiting for you to finish this, you know...thier lives may just revolve around your stories!

So hurry it up, will ya!

YOU BITCH!

YOu have net bak and did not take the time to tell me? And where's this story I'm supposed to be reading huh? HUH? I'll show you...one day I'll get bak at you for this...

Love you

Hmm...Sounds almost like Blade Runner. Can't wait to see more, I happen to like your writing. I still need to write this OLS fanfiction I have benn thinking about. Anyways, good luck on writing.

hi hi...*dizzy* ummm i had enough undizzyness to read and review this work of art in progress. i hope to see more up soon and ill ask Katty to explain the whole damn plot to me lol...head is throbbing..must have food...anyway keep writing. ja.

the extremely dizzy Cryz and her bishies