yes plz make the first chapter i think it would make a reallly good story :)

i like merlin. he's cool. i have a cat named merlin. he's odd.

Kinda short, but interesting anyway. I'd like to hear more... it's an interesting idea. Keep it up! -MV

more!

yes. make it into a story!

B-O-R-I-N-G-O...IS WORSE THEN THE B-I-N-G-O SONG...AND THIS POEM AS ALL THE OTHERS SINK DOWN MY TOILET AS I FLUSH...*sighs*...NO MORE STANKY POETRY!

It is sooooooo cool and I think you shoud make it in to a story(did I say that it was soooooooo cool)

Not bad at all! one of your best yet!well akira bane check out my new poem (CHAIN OF LIES)) its a poem about guilt and sorrow! anyone else that wants to see it goto abrock25 and check out it and more good poems

and storys... goodluck with your storys !

to a great writier

Another Harry Potter..Wow. You are dedicated.I'm when we were younger,your stories had no drama..Maybe it's the mere fact that you have so much talent that draws so many to you..I'm depressed..I have been crying for the past hour,alot of things are on my mind..Maybe you understand it..I feel our friendship is slowly fading away into mists,and I want my Chrono game back..I want you-know-whos attention.. but can't get it..Damn myself for being so mellow dramatic..Really nice prologue writing.

more!

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good!1

Make it a story please. It's really misterious.

WOW! that sounds like a goooood story! please do a chapter on it... i will sure read it!