I luv u belong to me and this looks lyk a rly gd start :D

Why flowers? Surely the murder attempts would have started by now? A dying man? The only person I can think of is Jack, but why haven't Jack gone after Dee yet?

I think you know what I'm going to say, but I'll say it anyways! Very, very good!

Wonderful, and Mary Higgins Clark-ish as usual! (Oh, and chapter six's cliffie is awesome!)

Oh la la la! Very nice twist! Dee is engaged!

It's moi again! Very nice, Very Very nice!

Awesome, as usual! And, it sounds so Mary Higgins Clark-ish! I LOVE it!

Very nice! Sounds just like a Mary Higgins Clark story! This is going on my favorites list!

Hey! Hey! Hey! u r so gd @ this! i swear u just sound xactly like Mary Higgins Clark. u can rite just like her. u captured Susan & Don v. vividly. the suspense & thrill were fantastic bcoz u lined it all up v. well. not 2 mention tt u wrote frm Susan, then Don, then Emily etc pt of view. tt's what i always do in my stories. keep up the gd work & rite soon!

This is really good so far!

Great job emmulating MHC's style.

I really enjoyed reading this story...
I think it is great to hear about old
MHC characters...add more soon!

I just tried to send a review but computer crashed. If this repeats - super sorry. Erase my first review, m' dear.

This is what I wrote:

1. Loved the conversation with Mum. Had to chuckle.

2. The radio show was great - she really knew her stuff about scams. You did your research (not that I would know but I bought it). Really adds to the credibility and it's really interesting by itself. Thanks for adding that.

3. SUSAN - LISTEN to Don. Take the flowers seriously! AH!

Please update soon! The suspense is really building. I LOVE THIS. I'd also love more scenes with Don and Susan.

'K. I don't even know the original author too well, but I was just catching up on some reading. Thought I might try your fic. I read the entire thing and was gripped. Excellent characterizations and the dialogue had a dramatic tone that really worked - it moved the story along. Don and Susan have great chemistry, although he needs to open up a bit more - which I'm sure will happen... right? I don't know why some others don't want their stories listed on fanfic. Makes me want to read Mary Higgins Clark.

Good story. Me like.

Actually, you captured the characters well and have crafted an intriguing story which has me hanging out for what happens next.

Keep it up. :)