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| love it 2008-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseok i like it the fact that he has a girl is cool keep it up |
| Maudiebeans 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI adored this, twas simple and sweet. I always wondered what Goku's reactions would be if he ever had the chance to hear about his father. This is a really great story of that idea :3 Its awesome! |
| Afrodite 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWell-done, it was like reading a bedtime story. I enjoyed learning Bardock's history in greater detail, and found Goku's reaction to King Kai's tale so sweet and heartwarming. |
| Unseen Watcher 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abusesweet. |
| A Dreamers Death- Dead Acco... 2004-10-03 ch 1, | abuseGood story Goku now understands his father and yet he's still an idoit naw that's mean I'm only joking good story. |
| Gijinka Renamon 2004-01-16 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. |
| Mizuwari1986 2002-08-27 ch 1, | abusesniffle...Alas, poor Goku. It's so sad... This story is great, though^^ |